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     Ice Jasmine Esquival of Trenton, New Jersey, updates her story.

September 2010, Trenton, New Jersey~

Ice Jasmine Esquival here.  I hope this finds you well.

I am doing okay; glad I am back in school, where I am a junior this year.  Hard to believe that I only have one more year left after this one. 

I had a pretty good summer, but I had to babysit my brothers and sisters; and it was hard.  My youngest brother (Branson) is nine, and he is autistic; as for my oldest sister, she is more like a younger sister, really.  At the age of 14, she is more like a baby: she is severely brain damaged.  Her former parents abused her, and now she's a vegetable.  She requires a lot of care.

My other brother and sister (Nevaeh and Jesus) aren't too bad, but Nevaeh is spoiled, and Jesus, he has a bad attitude.  He is always threatening to run away and join a gang; he hates school, and he hates having to watch his younger brother and sister.  I don't blame him one bit.  I'm not crazy about it either, but I still love my brother and sister.

The only good thing is church.  We go to a Baptist church every Sunday, and I sing in the choir.  I love to sing; always have, always will.  If I had anything I could be in life, it would be a professional singer, like my idol, Celine Dion.  She has a fantastic voice!  I could listen to her sing for hours!!

Unfortunately, my best friend, Erycka, moved to New York City: her dad got transferred there, on account of his job, and now I don't have a best friend.  Hopefully I will find one soon; but I bet she won't replace Erycka.  Erycka and I were the best of friends since we were in elementary school; it's hard to replace a friendship like that!

The days are getting shorter; why not?  Fall starts in less than a week.  I can't wait; I've had more than enough of this long, hot summer!!  I'm even looking forward to the snow in winter!

Well, I gotta run: am in study hall, and if Mrs. Delcombe sees me goofing off instead of studying, I might get docked.  I will write in here again soon; until later, this is Ice Esquivar saying adios!  Hasta luego!

~Ice.  :)

*to be continued.*

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Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 9/16/2010
very well done. Always enjoy your work
hug
kat
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 9/15/2010
This is like an ongoing novel (and don't I know what goes into an ongoing novel) where there is enough of the last chapter to keep one interested in the present chapter and looking forward to the next chapter... As always, very done, Karen.
Your friend in Southern California, Mark
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 9/15/2010
Excellent update, as usual Karen...
peace, Carole~
Reviewed by Paul Berube 9/15/2010
Great update as is your usual, Karen. God bless.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 9/14/2010
At least she has the church as her refuge...thank God for blessing, no matter how big or small.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/14/2010
Karen, your stories are so real ,I can't imagine where you get all your characters from, they are always so interesting! Great work!

Love,
etw
Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle 9/14/2010
Loved this Karen! As always I feel like she is the room talking to me. You have such a gift!

With Love,
Cindy
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 9/14/2010
Awesome update Karen, thank you for sharing
In christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/14/2010
Excellent update, Karen, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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