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by Mitzi Kay Jackson
Friday, October 4, 2002



       
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     Sitting in a corner waiting on the dawn to come...I was there. I saw what happen...you don't know you only will know what I tell you.

"Mitzi what happen?"

Can you please open the window...so I can feel the breeze...look at how the wind is blowing the trees they are almost touching the ground...

"Mitzi what happen?"


That's ok you don't have to open the window I can feel the wind anyway.

"Mitzi baby where did the blood come from? Is that your blood? Mitzi"

Get away from me...don't you come any closer. I am waiting on the dawn...the sun you heard me. I am going to sit here be here until the sun comes, and if your smart you will find a corner and sit too.

Foot steps in the blood.....blood on the walls...I pick up the phone and I call 911 come please...come quick...I don't know what happen and she won't tell me nothing...the address shit bitch I don't know you got a tracking system just get someone here quick...I sat the phone down...I didn't hang-up just in case something pop-up or something....

"Mitzi baby please tell me what happen" I crouched down in the corner to be on the same level. Then her eyes meet mine......I was scared......I was tired of being scared.....remember when they came into my home...you remember when they tied me up with duck tape. My mouth my hands behind my back. my feet too you remember...and before that they just came in my home and tried to take my soul you remember that you remember....I can't protect me....I got to protect me, Mitzi rubbed her stomach her hands were bloody and she was holding a straighten-out hanger...I can't I couldn't do it.... I looked closer at her body she had nothing on from her waist down.

"Mitzi,what have you done?" I put my hands on our heads...he wasn't going to be here for us....he wasn't here now....you can't protect me how were you going to protect us...I covered our ears but I still could hear her...I'm tired of this place...we should have never been here..we should never have...

"shut -up I yelled and jumped up and ran in the room to get a blanket the police couldn't find her like that how didn't I know she was pregant....how didn't I know.......... blood followed me in the room....blood was all over me...I looked down and I had no shoes or socks on I looked around the room and the smell of blood had consumed my nostroils and throat.....a half dranked/ half spilled bottle of Jack Daniels lay on the floor, pills thrown all over the room......everything thrown all over the room. What the hell was that smell? Fumes filling the air (gas) I looked down at myself again...I could here the siren coming in the backround...there was a hangers in my hand with blood and chunks of something and the smell.

Oh God no!!!! they are going to think I did it...I ran back in the room there Mitizi was still sitting in a corner.....staring out of the big bay window...you know the sun makes everything better she said and then looked up at me with a smile....eyes so clear and untouched with reality...just one more sunlite that is all I want.....I could hear the car doors close and can hear the footsteps.....I couldn't protect her then but I was going to try and protect her now.....I kneeled down and step right into her skin...I'll let Mitzi continue to watch for the sun and I will handle the police...cause I left her for too long much too long

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Reviewed by Tyrone Banks 10/1/2004
If you publish it - everyone will buy it. You have talent!!

Tyrone
Reviewed by Clyde A. 5/5/2003
You,re on your way to FAME,keep up the good work. GOOD LUCK! Clyde.
Lake City, Fla.
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 4/25/2003
Raw and powerful! The pain is too real...like Life. Write on!! Phyllis
Reviewed by Russ Okamura 3/1/2003
THIS IS truly an ASTONISHING and PROFOUND WORK! Very awesome write! IT WILL be tattooed in my mind for a LONG TIME to come!
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 12/4/2002
Damn Girl, you had me all tense and glued to the screen 'til I thought that I'd go blind. This is very friggin' good.

Love & Peace, Janet xoxoxoxo
Reviewed by TOMSDATTAR 11/12/2002
good read
Reviewed by ShyPoet 1 10/24/2002
I hadn't planned to read this story, but once I started ... stunning, compelling, poweful ... sad, but toooo real! Excellent writing!!!
Reviewed by Vicky Jeter 10/14/2002
Mitzi,
Shades of "If These Walls Could Talk."
Blessings for giving our secret a voice.
Reviewed by WaymonB 10/11/2002
"A very dark yet enlightening story to experience."
Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione 10/10/2002
::dropping jaw -- letting it hit floor::
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/8/2002
good write, mitzi!!
Reviewed by REilly 10/8/2002
Sick very very sick I loved it keep putting yourself out there Jackson
Reviewed by RON P KING 10/6/2002
sounds like and out of body experience with a slash of riveting suspense waiting for more,good write dear.

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