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     A boy is mesmerized by a fellow teenager with unusual colored hair.

I am in love.  One look at her, and PING! went my heart!

Curves in all the right places.  Not too skinny or too fat: built just perfect.  Shoulder length hair that was pink.  Yes, PINK, as in Pepto-Bismol pink.  LOL  Big, hazel eyes.  Perfect teeth.  Flawless, blemish-free tanned skin.  Long, long arms and legs: when she walked, she reminded me of a gazelle.

God, she was gorgeous!

I just hope I see her again.  I'd love to ask her out on a date or at least get to know her beforehand.  Don't know if Miss Hot Stuff would: I mean, I am fourteen years old (but could easily pass for a seventh grader: let's face it ... I'm short!!), maybe too young to even think of having a girlfriend, but hey: I'm a teenager.  My hormones are on overdrive!  I can't help myself!!  

Don't know what possessed this girl to dye her hair pink, but on her it looked positively great!  She was wearing a turquoise colored halter top and white shorts as well as turquoise blue sandals on her feet; the sandals had two pink flowers on the tops of them.  They were adorable.  So was she.  She was the cutest thing I had ever seen in my life.

I just wonder who she is and where she comes from.  I'd like to get to know her, but I'm the shyest thing this side of the Mississippi River; I'm not known for my coup de grace.  (Just call me Mister Klutzoid!)  I'm scared if I do ask Miss Hot Stuff out, I might do something totally stupid or off the wall and embarrass myself further into the National Geek Hall of Fame.

Well, I'd like some advice on how to approach this girl.  I'd really love to be her boy toy or at least be brave enough to be able to ask her out on a date!  I'd love to take her out to eat or to a movie playing at the Multi-Plex! 

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Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 7/19/2011
Well written Karen, you draw us into a teenage boys mind well
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/19/2011
All he can do is go up to her and say, 'Hi.' Start a conversation. What's the worst that could happen? She could say, 'No.' No loss. Well done, Karen.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 7/19/2011
Well written, Karen.

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