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     Ibrihiam Rosenkrantz continues his story.

It's me, Ibrihiam Robert Rosenkrantz.  I'm the kid who wrote about my girlfriend, Meghan Cowles, the girl I've had a crush on since I first laid eyes on her last year, when I was a eighth grader in middle school.

It's been a year.  Surprisingly enough, Meghan and I are still together.  She's as smart as ever, not to mention, as beautiful as a goddess.  Long, thick black hair, big, intense blue eyes, a killer figure with curves in all the right places, sweet personality, easy to please.  Meanwhile, I could make people throw up just by showing up.  I'm as ugly as sin: zit city, curly, unkempt hair that has a mind of its own, a big honker, horned rimmed specs: you get the picture.  I'm the poster boy for geekiness.

Meghan keeps telling me I'm being way too hard on myself, but I can't help it.  I see her, and it's like everything I thought I learned about females goes flying right out the window because let's face it: she's HOT with a capital H.  I'm glad she loves me, but I'm not worthy of it.  I tell her this all the time, but she tells me I'm being stupid or silly and I need to learn to love myself.  Easier said than done, Horatio.

I'm still trying to work up the courage to tell her I don't want to be her boyfriend anymore, but I see her, and I can't do it.  So I'm stuck between a rock and a hard place.  I honestly don't know what to do; I'm at a complete loss.

~To be continued.~

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Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 11/16/2012
I believe that Ibrihiam should leave well enough alone and accept Meghan's affection for as long as it lasts... However, he met her in eighth grade and is now, I'm not sure how it works nowadays, but in my day he and she would be freshmen in high school (I know, I'm dating myself) but as a freshman, " a killer figure with curves in all the right places?" Would a girl that age "Have curves in al the right places?" Yeah, maybe I really am dating myself.
Your friend In Southern California; Mark
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 11/16/2012
Sad, Karen, but well penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 11/16/2012
Very nicely written, Karen.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 11/15/2012
Well done story, I agree with Budd!!!
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 11/15/2012
stay with it you are more than you allow yourself to admit
budd

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