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Empty Airports
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Tuesday, May 28, 2013
This short story is rated "PG13" by the Author.
       
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Some prosetry unpacking, a short story hoping to find with time that vagaries will fade, wisdom will appear.
Empty Airports
by Odin Roark

Perhaps I was asleep
For I was once asked to believe
Wealth was everything
The quintessential measure of control
That luxuries could stave off Time

I''m now awake
And see no difference
Between Duration''s myriad clock faces
And what they do

See...
There''s my Omega watch
Tells time
Never needs winding
Yet
Like my Timex and Cassio
Now in a drawer
Packed away
Awaiting their own ticker deaths
It too is but my companion-slave to Time

Yes...

I''ve learned the hard way
Time is Time
However way it''s recorded
High quality watch
Economy style throw-away
Makes no difference
In the end
Their purpose merely leaves behind...

Had this car
It ran
But transmission whined
Sometimes hesitated
Like my "love" life
My "expression" life
Just wheels changing lanes
Eventually exhausting the paved surface
Returning to its essence
Sand and gravel raw

Used to fly private Learjets
Now there''s this Airbus A380
A 21st century people-mover
Where eight hundred pairs of eyes
Peer out the windows

With tattered paper map at my side
My maturing eyes are rewarded
Chronology continues happening below
The tiny dots of life
Swallowed by the shadow
Of this behemoth with wings
Floating across the oceans
Racing the sun
Reminding me and my watch
Nature''s way can''t be beat
Or bought

I''ve crossed many a mountain
Time''s most ancient regulator
Like a giant hourglass
Of unpredictable movement
Mass weakens
Rocks tumble
Scree flows
Sand become seashores
Nature''s unbridled ebb and tide
Continues

But...
It''s getting late

At night
With the sun long hidden
Below horizon''s edge
I gaze at a star-filled forever
As I habitually remove my faithful watch

Upon sunrise
I''ll fit the silver and gold jail cell back on
Listen to the "click" of the titanium clasp
Fasten the seat belt
Feel the touchdown on a runway unknown
Await the day''s rush to arrive
Use well the hours
And try to outdistance time

There''s something about empty airports
Something hopeful

 

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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on June 24, 2013
Time - One of mankind's greatest inventions? Or the worst idea ever? I too like quiet airports but long for the "busy routine" of the passing train. Your prosetry has a similar feel to my poetic efforts. I think the world is ready for something different. I know I am. M.True

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 18, 2012
this one gives us a journey into the various objects that segregate our lives into bits of waste without cause, i liked this a lot
budd

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2012
I like the zoom in zoom out of this writing. The touchpoints you author are excitedly akin to mine (three things I wish had never been invented: time, money and guns). So the "companion-slave" rings recognition for me, "That luxuries could stave off Time" hits two-in-one (two out of three for me). The zoom in of "...eight hundred pairs of eyes/Peer out the windows" is great held up next to the zoom out of:: "...tiny dots of life/Swallowed by the shadow/Of this behemoth with wings.." I love the interjected: "But.../It's getting late." Marvelous. From watch to runway and outdistancing time, I like the empty airports visage being something "hopeful." I like this whole thing. ~~ Diana