Great idea. I agree strongly with Odin, put the text higher and maybe find more readable friendly type style. Make the whole thing movie faster between desolves as well as getting to the next text, so it's more like reading a book. And choose more 'movie style' dramatic music, that changes and supports the image. Yes, more work, but you can use this when you go from 'experiment' and 'completed work' that you stand by. Repeating, good work, I know you worked hard on it. I think you have something that some will really enjoy. I've turned my novels into full cast audio-books with film quality effects and music and you took it one step further than I did. Very inspirering. I'm serious. Continued success. Paul
Interesting experiment. My suggestion is to close the gap between text changes, and to raise the text up a bit as the sound bar while watching it tends to interfere with the last line of each stanza. I also think the dissolves are a bit too drawn out. They could be shortened without losing any impact.
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