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The Dog On The Tracks
By Mr. Ed
Last edited: Wednesday, September 25, 2013
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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My Latest Submission To The Great Animal Rescue Chase
And a Follow-Up To My Latest Poem - ''Her Lonely Vigil Is Finally Over''

I first learned about this homeless street orphan from a police officer friend of mine more than a year and a half ago. She had discovered this poor dog roaming a huge vacant lot adjacent to some railroad tracks, and she immediately took pity on her and began feeding her. But this dog was extremely skittish and wary of people, so she asked me if I could trap her.

And thus began more than a year and a half long odyssey in our attempts to rescue her. I soon started going out to these railroad tracks just about every day myself and setting up my dog traps with all sorts of enticing bait. But I soon sadly discovered that this particular street orphan wanted no part of my traps – she just would not enter any of them no matter the bait, and I, like Police Officer Barb, could not get within 50 feet of her.

I now began watching this poor dog and following her movements along the railroad tracks, and I eventually discovered a tiny wooden shelter located in a huge clump of trees adjacent to the tracks that she slept in every night. Although we now knew where she slept, I feared crawling inside it, not wanting to spook her out and away from her little sanctuary.

And there were now three of us going out to the feeding station that we had set up for this poor street orphan in that vacant lot adjacent to the railroad tracks, but we just could not figure out a way to rescue this extremely wary and skittish dog.

As time sadly marched on, this dog’s story became even sadder to us. We eventually learned that she had been out on these railroad tracks for the past three years, and until about two years ago, she had lived in that make-shift wooden shelter in that clump of trees by the tracks with a homeless man. And now we sadly learned that this homeless person had simply vanished one day, leaving this poor dog behind to fend for herself.

Our third very determined pet rescuer named Katie eventually read about a man who had lost his beloved pet in the deep dark woods, and his dog would also not enter any dog trap. In his frustration over this, he decided to construct his own dog trap – an extremely huge Monster Trap – and it worked. He finally managed to rescue his own extremely skittish dog from the woods.

So Katie soon decided to borrow this man’s Monster Trap, since we were all now extremely frustrated in our far too long and unsuccessful attempts at rescuing this dog.

This trap was soon hauled out to the railroad tracks in a pick-up truck, and it took us nearly an hour to put it together out there. And once we did, we filled it with every type of mouth-watering food that we could think of from roast beef and baked chicken, to sardines and salmon. We even hung hot dogs (this dog’s favorite food) on strings from its mesh ceiling.

And now we retreated to our vehicles to hide and to wait for this extremely wary street orphan to come down from the tracks in search of her daily meal. We also now prayed that this borrowed home-made Monster Trap would work since winter was now fast approaching once more, and we really wanted to spare this poor dog another frigid winter out on the tracks.

After about an hour of hiding and waiting, we finally spotted her coming across the vacant lot towards the trap, and now we prayed even harder. But as we watched in dismay, this extremely wary dog darted in and out of the Monster Trap at least four times without walking all the way into it.

But very thankfully, on her fifth attempt to obtain her much needed meal, she walked to the back of the trap, and the massive trap door finally slammed shut behind her. This homeless dog’s three year ordeal living out here on these railroad tracks was finally over, and Police Officer Barb, Katie, and myself, were now all overjoyed.

And as the three of us have witnessed many times before - once trapped, this extremely skittish and wary dog soon transformed into an extremely sweet and affectionate dog – a dog that was now enjoying our gentle pets and soothing words – and she soon fell fast asleep in the back seat of my truck, now also enjoying its warmth and softness after spending the last three years sleeping on the cold hard ground.

After a brief stay at the animal hospital, Katie who had named this street orphan ‘Etta,’ soon whisked her away once more to her new adopted home, where deserving Etta is now truly enjoying life once more, and where she now loves being petted, talked to, pampered, and walked about in the park. And she now really enjoys falling fast asleep on her plush new dog bed.

©September 2013, Mr. Ed



  

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Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 13, 2013
lovely that Etta has her new, safe home

Reviewed on October 10, 2013
Excellent story, Ed; very well penned! LOVE the ending!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on September 25, 2013
Oh! the Wonderment of Great Ending!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on September 25, 2013
thanks to the perseverance of you and your friends, Etta will not have to suffer through a cold Chicago winter..
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 25, 2013
I enjoyed your poem and the story behind it is heartwarming...I LOVE happy endings for these wonderful creatures...

Anna

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 25, 2013
I read this story before in the poetry section, but it is no less endearing. I applaud you for your efforts in saving these lost canines and restoring their faith in humans as their benefactors.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 25, 2013
another great story, thank you
budd