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Closed
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Thursday, May 1, 2014
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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A flash fiction exploration for the journey of dreams that sometimes carries the burden of what’s left behind.
Closed
by Odin Roark

He knew it was time
To make the trip--
Closure beckoned.

Fifteen hundred miles,
His Prius purred,
Not like the vroom of the big rig
He hitched with
Back then.

Turning slowly onto Main Street,
Tires stirred pothole dust,
Setting adrift
Its fifty-three year residue.

A mangy dog sauntered across his path,
Glanced,
Continued,
Reminding him ghosttowns
Seemed to have
Shadow-lives of their own.

Atop tin-roofed stores,
Rusted weathervanes pointed east,
Fixed on his ambition’s resolve,
A memory-etched hitchhike,
His journey of dreams.

Across the street…

Gerald’s Barber Shop
Still stood,
Its spiral peppermint pole—
Frozen.

General Store displays,
Mere spider-infested windows
Quartering mannequin tombs.

Pleasantville’s only hotel,
Its vacancy sign peeling,
Its weaathered rocking chair left idle.

Harold’s Gas & Oil station,
Its erosion desperately holding on,
It’s single pump still showing
51 cents a gallon.

Pulling to a stop,
He stared blankly through Lucy’s Bakery window.
Even after all these years,
The faded flyer still bore semblance,
His thin pale face at seventeen
Staring back above the word
“Missing.”

He felt remorse.
The town had been good to him.
His parents,
Not so good.

Maybe his imagination was offering solace,
But the colorless face seemed at peace now,
Maybe forgiving him for causing such distress,
That pardoning he never allowed himself.

He smiled at Lucy’s door sign
“Closed.”

Perhaps…finally.




  

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Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on October 5, 2014
This says a lot I can relate too, reads easily, says lots, Loved it. When one door closes for me, it seems another opens though, that's life and truly I am blessed.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 30, 2014
Shades of 'The Last Picture Show.'

Ron