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     Sometimes we think we know better than our parents, teachers, or even God, but do we really?

  

Puss looked around, puzzled. What’s with these human servants of mine? They are bustling around, and around and around, constantly keeping busy and paying no attention to me, except to accuse me of getting under foot. The nerve! And to think they would cast me into that miserable wintery weather when I started complaining!

                Meow! Well I happen to be pretty good at sneaking right back in when they aren’t looking. Ah, ha! I’m smarter than they think! They are planning to go on a trip: to somewhere where it’s warm. Look at that, no extra bulky snow wear is going on this vacation! They’re going where it’s warm. While, I will just abide my time….

                “Where’s Pussy? Has anyone seen Puss?”
                “Tom, you will just have to stop looking, you’ve been at it for fifteen minutes already. The cat is perfectly capable of taking care of himself.”

                Mom had opened the door of the van while talking and Puss smiled smugly to himself. Chances were good they wouldn’t find him hiding under the back seat for a good long while. 

                Ah, it sure felt good after the heater started going and the van started rolling. This was the perfect place to have a nice long nap…

                The vehicle stopped once in a while and everyone piled out, but not Puss, he knew better. It was still much too cold, but then it was different. This time everyone was excitedly dragging their suitcases out and the kids left the sliding door wide open. Time to investigate.

                Puss scowled as he stalked around. What a hot, sulky place. Why did they come here anyway?

                “There’s Puss,” Susie screamed, (what a noisy child) “She must have come along with us!”

                Puss tolerated all the exclaiming and petting for a while, but they decided to go off and do some exploring on his own.

                After a few days he decided this warmer clime wasn’t so bad after all and when the family all searched for him, he hid under a banana leaf and pretended not to hear.

                Belatedly he thought: who’s going to give me a bowl of nice cool milk, or open can of sardines just for me? And where will I go if it rains? But the van kept getting smaller and smaller in the distance.

                Ever thought you knew better than God so took your own way?

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Reviewed by Eva Pasco 1/15/2016
I wish the ending were happier and the cat was reunited with his family.
Reviewed by Marilyn Friesen 5/13/2015
The whole story is true. These folks left Kansas for Mexico but couldn't find the cat either coming or going. How long they searched, etc, is just my imagination.
Insert God with any authority figure if you want. The point is sometimes children, especially, get into a lot of trouble because of not listening to those older and wiser than they.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/13/2015
That's a cute story, I think. I'm not sure what part is true. The part about the cat in the car when he shouldn't have been, or the part about the cat the left behind after the vacation because he hid and couldn't be found.

I'm not sure what God had to do with this story, but if we take a pet into our home, even a cat, we are responsible for that pet's life. Some cats do well if they are feral, most do not, climate or not.

Ron

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