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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· Truth is One


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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

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Magnifying Eye
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Sunday, March 19, 2017
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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A dark prosetry way “Pawnbroker” might have gone. Although an immoral way to right a wrong, often desperation makes a hard call. (Image by “Pawbroker.”

Magnifying Eye
by Odin Roark

He slipped the jeweler’s magnifying loop
down from his glasses.

She impatiently waited.

“It was my grandmother’s engagement ring.”

He looks closer, turning the diamond to catch a different light.

“She was married to a baron.”

He removes his magnifying loop from his glasses. Takes another,
more powerful magnifying loop from his drawer.

A nervous glance over her shoulder
at the icy drizzle coating the sidewalk
makes slippery a wave of ominous black umbrellas,
pushing her emotions to ominous disquietude.

As she turns back and leans on the counter,
an impassioned whisper meets dead ears: “I can show
you the appraisal.”

The little ring is slid across the counter.
“Fifty dollar.”

“You can’t do that to me. I’ve rent to pay.”

Void of any expression: “Forty dollar.”

“You’ll have me evicted.”

“Thirty-five dollar.”

“You’re evil. That ring is an heirloom.”

He pushes the ring closer to her hand.

“Evil? No. I’m just a pawnbroker, Ms.
I have rent to pay as well”

“Not this month.”

She pulls out a German Luger
and empties its arsenal in his head.

“This was my other inheritance.”

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Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on March 23, 2017
Your stories are amazing. I will share this with my daughter who is also a short story writer, she will gain much from absorbing it. Have a wonderful day Odin, keep inspiring us, xo

Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on March 20, 2017
Well, she still has the rent to pay!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 19, 2017
That heirloom was worth a life? If I remember the original movie with that scene where he ran his hand onto a spike for notes, the pawnbroker's choice was much more emotional.

I haven't dealt with pawnbrokers, but I do believe they provide a useful service and must profit from what they do, or they wouldn't be in business at all.

Ron

Reviewed on March 19, 2017
Pawn brokers are legal robbers! I've been insulted by them as well. A German Luger, eh? Cool!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 18, 2017
Ouch, I'm sure that hurt before passing as one dead. That's life and its hard knocks. John