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The Wave
By Eva Pasco
Last edited: Saturday, November 4, 2017
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Retaining a retinal image worth a thousand words...
The timeworn phase, “A picture is worth a thousand words,” is attributed to Frederick R. Barnard for the title of his article, “One Look is Worth a Thousand Words,” which appeared in a December 1921 issue of “Printer’s Ink.”

Perhaps that’s the general idea promulgated by those who take selfies with a smartphone or webcam to share their photos on social media.

One who scrapes by without advanced technological gizmos, I’ll vouch that a retinal image is worth a thousand words, whereby a single memory can convey a complex story—one I’m about to share predicated by a wave.

I’ve become addicted to preserving the last retinal image I retain of my mother’s wave when we part company after spending time together. As I roll the car past the driveway and round the bend onto the street, I wait for her to turn and wave at me before she approaches the doors straight ahead of her. Sometimes, the wave is not forthcoming if she gets distracted by heeding the greeting of another resident in passing. Then, I lament this shortfall driving cautiously along Main St. until I approach the red light to the world at large.

For me, the last retinal image of the wave represents my mother’s status for “as good as things will get” in the grand scheme of life. Maybe not as good as they were, but good enough until the next time, and the time after that, God willing.

While I will always retain retinal images of ghosts past, too numerous to mention, here’s an excerpt from my recently published work of Nonfiction, ‘100 WILD Mushrooms: Memoirs’ of the ‘60s,' which preserves a single memory in words:

#99 – Tribute to My Mother

Before the start of my sophomore year in college, I wanted to quit because the classes I needed to register had filled up and closed, making me frantic in my attempt to drop/add, drop/add. Exhausted and blistered, I blurted my intention to you. Though you sympathized, you extended no pity, telling me I wasn’t the only one to face a challenge. But, you made a call to the dean, telling him in no uncertain terms that if you paid tuition, you expected me to get the classes I needed to graduate. The following day the dean opened up more sections for those in my similar plight.

As I conclude this story, I’m riding the crest of a wave until our next get-together.

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Reviewed by JB Richards (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2018
The one goal every parental caretaker has is to preserve as many precious memories of their aged parents as best they can and while they can. Without reservation and with much candor, Eva Pasco essentially captures the heartache and desperation of feeling time slip by in this brief glimpse into her relationship with her own mother, making this her situation easily relatable even as we apply these same sentiments to understanding our own parents’ mortality. As always, Pasco’s dee and personal expressions of the heart reach in to grab the soul!

Reviewed by Peggy Lueck (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2018
A beautiful tribute to your beautiful mother. It's, also, a good reminder, that, the smallest things are, very often, the biggest things.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 11, 2017
This is a great story (not an article). A story is a "slice of life" whether fiction or nonfiction, told with flair, passion, humor, and more often than not, with love. Articles are an attempt (however weak) to pass on dispassionately an account of some event that actually happened, but from a distance usually under the illusion that the reporter is telling the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth. Some readers just don't get it, do they?

How, where, when, and why we say goodbye is one of the most intimate stories we can tell. You just told yours beautifully.

Reviewed by Tolulope Williams
Reviewed on November 7, 2017
One of my greatest regrets is having picture....to cruise me through the memory lane.....i5s just as if I aint got a history. I sat back and watched my peers at high school taking selfies and when they post them on social media years later....I sulk at not being in those pictures.....but now at college, the same mistake won't find a reputation........

Thus is worth the read ma'am

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on November 5, 2017
What an enlightened article you have written Eva, I enjoyed reading it, have a great Sunday dear

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 5, 2017
a fine tribute to your mother

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 5, 2017
More like an article then a story, this one is also a tribute to your mother.

I, too, have an endearing memory that was videoed by my attendant in 2011, as I said goodbye to her. She cried and said, “This is the last time that I will see you.” I talked to her last week on the phone, but have been unable to get back. If a picture is worth 1000 words, perhaps that video is worth 1 million.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 4, 2017
Your writings, such as this one, may well serve to evoke images and memories within the reader as this particular write did for me. I also retain the image of my mother's final wave as I said good-bye to her, many, many times over the years during the course of my many travels, so many that I cannot count. Yes, I always walked down to the end of the street, as the point where she would again disappear, as we exchanged our final waves. When I think of her, I still feel like I am exchanging our final waves. Thank you for this post, Eva.