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Glitter Tree Circles
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Monday, February 19, 2018
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Sometimes, yesterday’s prosetry struggle becomes even more of a question. This is dedicated to all who have pondered what it’s all about. Do we all create a Glitter Tree of a circuitous nowhere? Perhaps it's inevitable, given the aspirations we are conditioned to work for. But then there’s Peggy Lee’s classic jazz vocalization to wake us up: “Is that all there is?” https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LCRZZC-DH7M
(Image by Kandinsky)


Glitter Tree Circles 
        
SCRAPBOOK FIRSTS

A Teddy Bear propped atop the crib's corner,
a bell beneath its neck,
silent,
that's fine,
I just realized I can see.

No discomfort yet.
Learning's first skirmish begins.

The blanket's got my back.
The rubber sheet's got my blanket.
Just lie and wait.
Soon mobiles dazzle my eyes.
Excitement sends my legs kicking.
Spillways' open.
Wow!
Mommy says that's okay
I just discovered I exist.

FIRST XMAS

I sit beneath a green triangle.
Strange creatures circle the bottom.
High above pointy triangles twinkle,
colors blink at me,
curling around the tree,
coiling in and out of prickly things,
globs of white fluff softening the glare.

Funny…

My nose tells me this lit-up green thing should be outside.

What do I know?
I just learned to crawl.

BIRTHDAY 5

Teaching me
I'm important,
‘cause kids give me presents,
just like Santa Claus.
Be good,
maybe get more.

Is this the planting of my own tree?
What do I know/
I'm just learning to party.

LOWER SCHOOL

To be or not to be.

School yard bully.

Chalkboard genius.

Teacher’s soft.
Oh so soft.
Sending emotions askew.

HIGHER SCHOOL

Frat life.

Suds life.

Study life.

Suffer life.

GRADUATION

Gifted new car.
Congratulations.
One,
two,
three girls,
future nights,
travelling with decorations now.

FIRST JOB

Brooks Brothers pledge.
Button down promises.
Watercooler lessons.
Grab ass sleight of hand.
All part of Tree's irrigation.

That's fine.

I learned well.

I'm a career man now.

FIRST WIFE

Draped in luxury.
First child staring blankly,
even as I position his own Teddy Bear.

FIRST FAMILY XMAS

Tinsel climbs to the top where
five-point light touches ceiling,
lights coiling about the vortex,
ever squeezing tree's life,
childhood's white cotton fluff,
now but gooey flock,
hardened to rock,
smothering prickly defense.

Once of Nature,
now synthetic.
Less time for yesterday's real.
That's fine.
I'm a family man.
A man of responsibility.

MARKET CRASHES

Wife.
Son.
House.
Gone.

EAST VILLAGE BAR

Hunched over Jack.
Permanently crippled scrawny tree atop TV.
Ragged angel leaning sideways.
Another Jack…
Every-day-of-the-year Xmas repeatables.
Glitter time always there.
Happy hour always same.
Guaranteed.

Feet no longer kick.
Nothing's got my back.
Spillways can't open.
Can't pee.
Can't cry.
Dam about to burst.

SLEEPLESS DREAMS

I coulda' been a ...

But a tree kept cropping up.
Tinsel.
Flock.
Lights.
Glitter.
Each year bigger.
Touchy feely creatures at the base.
Wood.
Plastic.
Metal.
Marble soldiers.
All because…

SOMEONE ONCE TAUGHT ME

Teddy's bell would ring.

Mobile's precarious balance would remain real.

The star,
haloed angel,
bright luminance,
now an abandoned lighthouse,
guidance amiss,
fog enveloped waves tossing everything
against cliffs rising,
pushing upwards,
reaching precipices anew,
seducing,
always seducing,
readying edges.

My legs.

My balance.

Falling.

Where's my Teddy?

My blankie?

My God...

Don’t say that’s all there is.



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Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 23, 2018
a very well written piece in a different manner of expression, I enjoyed the read

Reviewed on February 20, 2018
You really get the reader into the head of this person all the way to his "fall"! I liked Peggy Lee's style.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 20, 2018
Another lifecycle posting. As your story reached the end it became very similar to my story posted just before yours. Near the end, our lives can become horrible. Hell on earth. And memories can be a part of what continues to bother us as we go through those phases. Woulda… Coulda… Shoulda… But in the end, "That's all there is." "Ain't no sunshine when she's gone."

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 20, 2018
I've never considered expressing life in this vein creatively. Especially my own life. Splashing images/thoughts strung together to recount a personal story. Unique. Cool. An emotional roller-coaster ride you've had under the sun, Bruce. I can relate. More balance now though, I'm sure. Peggy Lee was unique. Not a fan though. On a side-note: I kept visualizing (as I read) someone throwing paint balloons at a very large segmented canvas. If you could direct something like this in theatre it might be very effective. Enjoyed. Now... go seek a Great Perhaps. Peace... rlc