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Old Baggage
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Monday, June 18, 2018
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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With so much depression haunting so many, the afflicted have to find a means of comfort. (Image by Philip McKay)

Old Baggage

After walkin’ the streets of anywhere-everywhere,
I pause at a street vendor and who nudges me in the ribs?

My friend, Conscience, Mr. C for short,
reminding me of some unresolved troubles.
“How you doing, my straight-jacket pal?”

So, of course I was momentarily trapped waiting for my knish.
He loved that straight-jacket phrase to remind me of a friend,
who ending up in Bellevue, blamed me for what sent her there.

Damn… And my Houston Street knish
was just getting started with a mustard lather.

Mr. C persisted. “How’d those goofy faces you made
for the doctors and nurses work out for ya, huh?
He knew I’d played crazy to get into her ward at Bellevue.

“It worked,” I answered, remembering the look on that doctor’s face,
the shape of his three-piece suit wrinkled,
his body exhausted maybe from an all-nighter with patients,
or a sojourn on the couch of the doctor’s lounge,
hard to tell which.

That memory was but a recurring image rearing up as I walked
Manhattan watching the Wily Coyote footwork of pedestrians
trying to escape, I know not what,
that seemed like a populace of lost… children.
Maybe I was one of them?

Thinking back on my favorite haunt, the 5th Ave Library,
I recalled many a walk-up and pausing to reflect on Golberger’s Lions at the entrance.
Lord Astor and Lady Lenox, as they were renamed
from their 30s identity of Patience and Fortitude,
LaGuardia’s symbolic designation during the economic depression.
That other kind of depression.

So here I was, letting Mr. C catch me again in the tug-a-war between my own time
and that of yesteryear. But…

My knish was ready and Mr. C
was becoming a nuisance.

I paid,
smiled,
and took a big bite.
“So?” I said between smacking my lips.
“So?” Mr Conscience answered.
“Wanna a bite?” I asked.
“I don’t eat,” he replied.
“Yeah. Of course not. Gotta keep you edge, right?
“Got that right,” he retorted.
“Why is it every time you come out to bug me, I’m always eating,
and you always have the same things to sayr. Why’s that?”

He grinned and put his arm around my shoulders.
“I’m that part of you no amount of comfort food can
pacify. That’s why. When are you going to realize that?”

We walked.
I ate.
He kept smiling.
“Damn guilt shit,” I spouted,
stuffing the last morsel of my comfort-pacifier
into my mouth.

Mr. C tipped his hat and wandered off across the street
as I came up on a homeless old man slumped against a building wall
mumbling with a twinkle in his eye, “Conscience should mind his own business, you know?
Heftin’ old baggage forever is a bitch.”
“Yeah. It is, isn’t it.” Be both nodded. I slipped him a five. “Grab yourself a knish, old buddy.
Somethin’ ‘bout them makes the past weigh less.”

 

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Reviewed on June 22, 2018
"Vanhaa lunta."......."old snow" in Finnish. That's the way we must allow the past to be........melting old dirty snow allowing the new growth to spring forward. 'Enjoyed! I have a shrink. You have "Mr. C".

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Linda Gould
Reviewed on June 21, 2018
I guess we all have our own "Mr. C." Good job of making it/him feel like a real, persistent presence.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 19, 2018
Another way to look at "voices." Not necessarily that one is crazy, but something that we all have as we get older and remember the unpleasant things we should, perhaps, not have done or said. Comfort food may be a way of dealing with it.

In a way, this appears to be a memoir rather than fiction. Maybe not your memory, but many others. Good write.

Ron

Reviewed on June 18, 2018
Everyone would have some old baggage, but they differ from others. This brings back memories when I was a young girl in Hong Kong, those street vendors used to come to the street, and I would run down the stairs to get the treats. They were like tiny portable restaurants brought to our doorsteps, and they made mighty good food.

Sandie

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on June 18, 2018
Reading this, it's like I am in that same picture, seeing, hearing, smelling, touching and tasting all that the narrator does ...great sense of expression here - relays the scene faultlessly.

Rx