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Murderer!
By Patricia Hilliard
Last edited: Saturday, January 17, 2026
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Who is the real murderer?

She had been feeding the birds all winter. She had purchased the best seed for them.  She had put out the finest suet.  Her bird feeders were clean and attractive, located in the best places for bird feeding and safety.

And now today, she found a dead bird.

It was not the entire body of a bird, but the remains. Pieces. Wings, feet. A head and bill. A beautiful red cardinal. One of her favorites that she had cared for all winter.

Now dead.

It was a juvenile from a successful nest built in a dogwood tree in the spring.  She had been so happy to see the male and female cardinals building together, feeding the chick.  She had watched this little cardinal fledge from the nest and fly into the tall green trees of summer. 

But today, as the autumn sun was fading, its life had ended.

It surely was a victim of that black cat that went running out of the backyard just moments ago. Revenge was called for.

She went indoors and got a bucket of cold water. She swore that no longer would her bird friends need to suffer from this scourge. She would do whatever she had to do to put an end to the suffering.

She put on rubber gloves and covered them with canvas gloves. She put a scarf around her face and pulled the hood of her jacket over her head.  Today things would be different.

She went out to her yard.  She walked to the back of it where the alley of brick ran along other backyards connecting them in a maze of gardens, lawns and shrubs. She opened the gate, passed through and closed it.  She gazed down the alley in search of that little murdering black cat. This would be the last time. That cat would die.

She crept along, carrying her bucket of water, ready to take action.

But having walked past six houses on either side of the alley and still not seeing the black cat, she turned and headed back.   There were just too many places for the black cat to hide.

As she opened her gate and stepped back into her yard, she heard a slight meow. 

No mistaking it, it was the cry of a cat, perhaps a kitten. It didn’t matter. Revenge was required.

She looked down and saw a small soft kitten coming through the fence from her neighbor’s yard. 

“Kitty, kitty,” she said in the sweetest voice she could speak.

The kitten approached her, rubbed against her leg, tail caressing her knee.  So sweet.

The woman reached down and grabbed the cat with one hand, shoved it into the bucket of cold water and held its head beneath the bubbling cold brew until the body went limp.

This cat would eat no beautiful bird. Not in its short life. Never!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed on October 29, 2018
Wow! As the owner of two indoor cats at my home and five outdoor kittens at my shop, this was painful for me to read. I love the birds at my shop that stay in the crepe myrtles and the I love my cats. Would the cat have been rewarded or drowned if it had killed a few rats?

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 22, 2018


whew!


never stop writing!

m

Reviewed by Patricia Hilliard
Reviewed on October 21, 2018
Thanks everyone for reading and giving responses. I meant for the story line to force people to take sides. I think the story was successful. Now I'm wondering if I'll win the prize.

Reviewed on October 20, 2018
Shocking and believable! Revenge, no matter how we pay for it, is sweet..........so sick that I love it!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Tygo Lee
Reviewed on October 19, 2018
That's not nice. Cats hunt and kill by instinct, not like us humans, for sport, revenge, war, or other psychotic atrocities. Birds are a natural prey for them. Should we then blame evolution rather than the feline itself? And how should we judge the assassin main character?

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 19, 2018
Cat lovers will hate this story. A new cat, butterscotch with white nose, came by our birdfeeder this morning to check it out. I believe that more birds die here as a result of window strikes and occasional hawks, than cats. But I could be wrong.

Birds live longer than cats. Birds have many many more offspring than cats, because birds are prey for many mammals, some reptiles, and other birds like owls (voracious songbird killers). This year's hatch of fledglings has little chance of surviving a year. The ones that do learn how to grow and old age by avoiding being caught by the likes of stupid cats.

Ron

Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on October 19, 2018
It was painful to read about this vile murderer. Alas, this is where the horror lies, going about its business in broad daylight, justifying actions taken.