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Nomadic Hearts Revisited
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Monday, November 19, 2018
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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After watching a new Netflix documentary last night, “Dogs”, I though this piece of flash fiction appropriate to revisit. So much wanting, so little fulfillment. Easy to assume it’s a chronic ailment of all ages and species. (Image by pinterest)


 

Nomadic Hearts Revisited

 

Seems just yesterday simple Jane’s heart kept perfect time.  Ticking, never losing a beat.  Days seemed good.  Nights seemed hopeful.

 

The streets of her town, barren of big city chaos, knew calm.  Knew boring.  Knew best the general store, two-pump Texaco station, weekdays by habit, weekends by…

 

McDonalds was big at one end of town, KFC at the other.  Frosty Freeze in the middle.  On the outskirts, Lucky’s Bar stayed alive into the wee hours. 

 

Biker guy liked her.  Told her she was pretty, deserved wind in her hair.  She bought it.  He delivered it.  Both regretted it.

 

He biked down to Mexico.  She hitched into NY.  Wrote home: I’m a Kelly Girl!

 

Life remained livable, even with her heart still roaming, exposed and vulnerable.  Then, Burt came along.  Young, educated smoothie.  Wall Street predator by day, trophy hunter by night.  Simple Jane, unfortunately got in his sights.  One night. Two nights.  No nights.

 

Atop her apartment roof, that place all the lonely people frequent, she visited every night.  Lights of the city meant something.  She didn’t know what.

 

Hers was a wounded heart.  Plain Jane knew it, far too many others as well.  Still, finally, she found some special moments of rest.  Time wound her back up.  More ticking.  Important ticking.  Love ticking.  Until it didn’t.

 

Tag on scruffy mutt’s collar said Reggie, another frequent roof visitor.  Gave her licks and wags.  He crouched beside her, watched the stars together—every night. ‘til the winter snows came.

 

Reggie still visits the roof.  Wanders about sniffing.  Can’t find plain Jane, but when he lies down at the edge of the roof, some say her reflection is still there in his eyes. 

 

 


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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 19, 2018
Your phrasing and imagery is superb in this. I love flash fiction. The story is gripping and easy to assimilate. The last sentence is indeed poignant and makes you wonder. Did Jane drift off and fade into obscurity? Did she die? The dog wanders about sniffing. Lays down at the edge of the roof. Did poor Jane cash in? I love open endings. Allows the reader to project into the storyline. You are quite strong in this form, Odinsan. Well done. Really enjoyed this piece. r

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 19, 2018
At first I thought, "Little ditty about Jack and Diane," but then I read on and realized that it could be a million plain Janes out there looking for happiness in the bright lights and never finding it. A thoughtful piece for all those lonely, wishful, women who never get there.

Ron