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The Final Wait
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Tuesday, May 14, 2019
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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With global unrest accelerating with sabre rattling and empty dialog exchanges, one is left wondering not the “if” but the “when” the missiles made in Iran, Syria, and even US sold weapons to Saudi Arabia will turn on more innocent people. One can only wonder what it must be like for the simple innocents in villages from Africa to the Middle East to exercise patience and hope to quell their fear. I chose a prosetry style for this piece of fiction purposely thinking it might enhance the closing and along the way, involve the reader with short thoughts and suggested snapshot images.)

 

The Final Wait


The village air is filled with bistro's aroma,
The morning's first brew.
The old man's first cup.

Sitting at his sidewalk table,
He breathes deeply the dawn's fresh air.
He sips.
He knows it's coming.

His eyes turn south.
From the hills,
It will appear, and...

Still the sun continues to rise.
Sparrows wait at the bakery door.
Crumbs are good.
Always good.

He waits.

Next door,
A father and uncle
Deliver the newlyweds' finished chair,
A craft of love,
Its coating of shellac,
Sparkles in the sun's reflection.

Across the street,
An old battle scarred bicycle
Rests chained to the light pole,
Rusty links still loyal.

Its young owner works atop the building
Repairing his grandmother's sagging clothesline posts,
Eyes darting from hammer and nail to the south.

With windows closed everywhere,
Sealing in what air remains fit to breathe.
The bakery's gaily painted door bursts open.
A white aproned girl dashes out,
Her panicked eyes to the south,
She leans down, placing her hand on the cobblestones.

The boy on the roof
Careens down the stairs,
Jumps on his bike,
And like the girl,
Peers to the south.

On his second cup now,
The old man stares at the stone street
Vestige passage his grandfather helped build.
Soon, he knows,
The street will be rubble,
The air will be filled with acrid smoke,
Cries will be heard,
Executions will be piled,
Sorrow will be everywhere,
But for now...

The girl runs up to her mother's embrace.
The boy bikes for home.
The sparrows fly to their nests.
The fluttering leaves hold their breath.
The street suddenly becomes quiet,
Save the clanging of church bell warnings

As the scream of another missile is heard approaching.

As sounds of the guided destruction invades the cobblestone history,

The few windows still intact begin to shudder,

As the ringing church bells sound the warning.


He places his revolver on the table.

The dark arrows invade the sunrise.

The wait is over.

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 15, 2019
A heartbreaking, but all too real, scene of tranquility shattered by the inevitable coming of war. While you did not mention, I believe like Richard, that Israel holds the key to whether or not nuclear war will break out in the Middle East. But there's always a wildcard, India and Pakistan both resorting to their nuclear stockpiles.

I wonder if there's any way we can ever defuse the animosity that grows as population grows and drought affects one region after another until the final hammer falls.

Ron

Reviewed on May 15, 2019
Your words made me feel so much sorrow! "War...huh!...What is it good for? Absolutely nothin'!..........." I feel their apprehension and anxiety as they "wait". Holy smokes! How terrible! Such touching "snapshot images", Odin!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 15, 2019
And it's quite intriguing how Israel is so much the geo-political center of it all. A huge conflict is going to escalate in the Middle East. It's almost upon us. Then...everything that can be shaken will be shaken, in order to reveal those things which cannot be shaken. As always Bruce, your imagery plays out like a film in the mind. Thank you for sharing. r

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on May 15, 2019
Such a heartbreaking reality, from which there is no respite. It brings to mind the lines...

They would not listen, they're not listening still
Perhaps they never will