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Hummingbird at 30,000 Feet
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Friday, June 28, 2019
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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History never tells the whole story. Many have answers. Some have questions. Thus, an allegory of sorts follows. (This was written years ago when its history had happened)

 

 

Hummingbird at 30,000 Feet

 

Flying at 30,000 feet

Hummingbirds don't peer in from the outside

But

Why so bitter

Says It, the hummingbird

I look at my mini bottle

Sniff it again look back

Hummingbird gone

Thank God

Says I

Hummingbird back

You're welcome

Says It

I crane my neck in panic

Push the attendant button

Yes sir

Bird

Pardon sir

Bird out the window

Attendant looks

I don't see anything but clouds, sir

I look back

She's right

Guess I need a nap

Says I

Care for a pillow

Says She

And so it went

Heathrow to New York

Until it didn't

My nap was short

I slowly took a peek

Yup

Hovering outside the window

Shoo

Say I

The bird backs away

Then flies at me

Again with the levitating

What?

Says I

You were damning yourself, remember?

Says It

I pull the shade

Turn

Close eyes

Wait

No peeking

Peace

Until

Pecking at the window

Lift shade

Okay

Says I

You have my attention

Go on

Says It

Go on where?

About your doubts

Why are you so damn obnoxious?

Says I

No answer

Look, it's like this

Says I

I look around

Passenger expressions say

I should be locked up

I look at the hummingbird

***

By the way

Says I

How come I'm the only one that can see you?

You're the only one needing to keep it together

Says It

So, smart one, why me?

Says I

Trying to keep it together?

Says It

Yeah

Says I

Maybe you sense something no one else does

I shrug

Nonsense

Says I

I'm just an average everyday guy flyin' to New York

Are you sure?

Says It

Over the intercom, the captain speaks

If you look out your window

You can see Lockerbie Scotland below

Quite a site

Very beautiful

Enjoy

I look

The hummingbird is gone

 

 

 

And that's it? asks the doctor

 

I open my eyes

 

Yeah

 

Just a dream, says the doctor

 

I slept through my alarm that morning, doc

 

How come me?

 

Why me missing the flight?

 

Questions only fool us with answers, Charles

 

Says He

 

Like the hummingbird?

 

Like the hummingbird

 


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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 18, 2019
This write is rich with subtext and personal application for me. Where we live, on the edge of nature in SoCal, we have scads of hummingbirds. My wife and I love birds so we feed them, and care for them. In return, they excite our cat to the point of lunacy, and they fully entertain us, as well as offering me creative inspiration. In Indian cultures Hummingbirds are spirit animals, as well as Totem animals and power animals. It's all a very cool study.

For instance the Mayan's associated Hummingbirds with solar energies, or the masculine sun as it tries to win the favor of the feminine moon. The Pueblo Tribes associate the hummingbird with rain, and the use of the birds feathers for calling on the rains. The Mojave have a legend that the hummingbird is sent out into the primordial darkness to find light when humans (as some claim) dwelt underground.

No matter what each persons beliefs are, most of us seem to get what we 'need' to accomplish what we've each been called to do. When we've finished that - our lives end. Enjoyed this Bruce. Spoke to me. Well done. r

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 29, 2019
If I'm not mistaken, that plane crashed or exploded. A nice segue out of the danger zone. With the hummingbird, nonetheless.

But I can't help thinking of Capt. Kirk meets the Twilight Zone, where William Shatner first came on my radar and stuck there when he saw a gremlin on the wing in Nightmare at 20,000 Feet.

Ron