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Distant Footsteps
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Monday, September 16, 2019
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Sometimes our most recent lessons reach back the furthest. Some flash fiction remembrances in prosetry style.

 

Distant Footsteps

How present
This past
Called memory

Weary soul dragging
Hobnail boots
Caked with crud
Mud
And oil

"Drop them greasy clothes"
Came the sometimes loving voice
The sometimes malevolent voice
But always his wife's warning
My mother's caring way

So many years past
When linoleum's impoverished sound
Is so remembered
Stepping from stove to table
Her laboring hands
Hefting the pressure cooker
Laden with steam softened cracked wheat
Barely eatable
That day's nourishment
Weighing upon
Forever toiling legs
Cushioned by sheepskin slippers
Whispering their shuffled prayer
I care

Generously ladled
Chew-your-brain-loose grains
Fit for health
Unfit for a kid
Layered my stomach
Fortified my heart
Prepped me abler
To gather reverie
So dear

Then

There was the sound
So ethereal
Heavenly I was told
Of bare feet
Curling the once-a-day-vacuumed
Pride and joy carpet of sage green wool
Replacing recently vanquished
Throw rug jigsaw mess
My early youth played upon
Our palace place
The living room

Scrunching pleasures
Toes lapping up that carpet
Dad's feet
Awful specimens
Calloused of years hard labor
Mother's feet
Preserved with nightly hot water soaks
Epson salts
When we could afford it
Worthy of pedicure
Never afforded

Me

Always wore my socks
Heavy wool
Darned when worn spots
Yelled loud enough
Mixed colors
When necessary
Yet always comfy
Homey
Loving covers
For footsteps
Unaware of the journey ahead
When steps would have to become strides
Leaps
Bounds
And eventually
Idleness

So present
These footfalls of then
Becoming resonances
Foreshadowing paces to come
When a once stubborn child
Needed to listen carefully
Or miss the lessons
Still echoing today
From waning  footsteps
Passing near by

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 18, 2019
Exquisitely written memories tinged with emotion. Sure glad I didn't have to eat steam softened cracked wheat. An interesting analysis of feet. I never looked. Barefoot suited me fine except for occasional rusty nails. Those socks sounded warm. My feet were often cold. Modern linoleum is just more plastic. And carpet doesn't last nearly as long. Good stuff. Reflections we almost do it in due time.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 16, 2019
A lovely recreation of childhood experience and memory in living color and images; bring memories of my own past to bear. Enjoyed.

Reviewed on September 16, 2019
Your imagery is sooooo good that I am smelling the linoleum! I remember walking on it in my mother's kitchen........your words are genuine, Odin! I like that!

Love ya!

Jane