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Le' Cage' Blu...
by Ed Matlack
Tuesday, June 30, 2020

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     Strictly fiction, of a past life or possibly a future one, bare with me, this may take sometime. Any comments regarding future chapters and such will be greatly accepted and probably used or abused...thanks!

 She opened with a small bar,

Some stools, tables & matching chairs,

She served what she could find as well as whom,

Most of her clientele of the French Jamaican variety,

But that’s okay, we all got along well, in her place there was never gloom.

 

None of us knew her real name, so we called her Blu,

It seemed fitting with the name of the establishment,

So she started out quite small, except on weekends,

That was time when money was to be made, stocking her shelves,

Kept her going for another week, it was her businesses glue.

 

She bartended & waited on tables, though she had no food,

Pretzels to help keep the “marks” thirsty, keep them playing their cards,

And losing to each other or the house helped her bottom line,

She decorated with all sorts of whatever she could find,

Especially after a bar fight, usually between local bards.

 

When first we met I owned and lived at my marina,

A small grouping of docks, flat bottom garvey boats,

Usually rented to the hungover patrons of the Cage,

 But it kept me in cheap rum & something minor to eat,

And marina ownership kept me at the very least a business owner,

She wanted to rent an all-day fishing boat which I could easily supply,

I would be the captain with one or two of my Jamaican “boys”, setting lines & such.

 

Most of her patrons would end the day sleeping on deck or being sick due to the swells,

We would cast off at 6am, navigate into the Gulf before the sun got hot,

Then we would anchor out over a wreck, and the fishing, such as it was would begin.

© -ed- 7/1/20

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 7/3/2020
I think that using the word "bare" might have been a Freudian slip. ;-)



I may be wrong, usually am, but I believe that Jamaica started out as a British colony. If you want French, I would suggest Haitians. Also not sure what "bards" are, unless they are fighting poets. I assume your location is in Florida rather than Jamaica. Jamaica is in the Caribbean, not the Gulf.



Sounds like a story right up your alley with a lot of Gulfstream dreamin' added. Like my cousin said once, already owning a 1947 Chris-Craft ocean cruiser, "I'm going to get a sailboat, sail out into the Caribbean and live off the land." I told him he would be living off the water.



Get a good editor from one of your writing buddies for you publish for real.



Ron

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 7/2/2020
Ed! This is fantastic work! I can so easily get into this story! Write on, poet!

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 7/2/2020
a cool begining
Reviewed by John Herlihy 7/1/2020
A real tropical summer's tale. Interesting.

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