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Rainbows of Melancholy Diesel
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Tuesday, January 5, 2021
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Even as the bombardment of corruption ala leadership style tries to wind down, there’s always tomorrow’s bombastic idiocy to disrupt our lives. Drives me bats, sometimes. Makes me revisit the prosetry of long ago that was to me a catharsis I didn’t even understand at the time. But now? Oh, my. Once again, it’s needed. (Image by old Kodak Pony camera, back when)

 

Rainbows ala Melancholy Diesel


Sitting atop worn tires,
We remove wax paper,
Positioning our Wonder bread sandwiches,
Cheese,
Bologna,
Mayo,
A canned pickle,
Each with a note.
Dad's: Have a good day.
Mine: Mother''s thinking about you.

Scrawny rib-bare Brutus,
Junkyard dog with a heart,
Pants patiently,
Knowing my rejected crusts are his.

Welding sparks fly across the yard.
Bertha, another earthmover in repair,
Readying for tomorrow's needs
Rests silently a few hours before
Diesel-noise-hell fires up,
Chalking up another rugged workout,
Shortening its life another day.

We pass the bottle.
Only one soda pop today.
Dad ran out.
We share.
Bite of sandwich.
Gulp some burp-ola.

We both sit silent.
10 and 55 with little to say.
Age separation's itch
Hesitant to scratch.

We chew and stare.
Oil slick puddle
Holds our attention.
We smile.

"Pretty ain't it?"
He says.
"Yeah, I guess,"
I says.
"Gotta ‘preciate rainbows son."
"Yeah I guess."

"Oil's from Bertha over there?" I ask.
He nods
"Yeah. Her crankcase be hurtin' lot lately."
"Bad, eh?"
He nods again.
"Yup. Might be on her last days."
I look back at the puddle.
"It is pretty."
"You bet it is."

He wraps part of the sandwich back up.
"Have the rest later."
"Why does oil get all rainbowy, Dad?"
He flashes his grin.
"Earth's way of winkin', son.
Sharin' some buried history.
All them bones,
Leaves,
Trees,
Relatives,
Soon us.
Just old life winkin'."

He stands,
Adjusts his bib overalls,
Looks down at me.
I gulp the last of burp-ola,
Stifle a belch,
And take a last glance at the oil slick.
"Thanks."
He looks down at the rainbow changing colors.
"It hears ya. Yup. Life’s always listenin’."

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 9, 2021
Glad I happened upon this in the Stories section. I seem to recall reading it before, but it is certainly one of your best. Reminds me of all those times I played through greasy work yards from factories to breweries where the landscape had been reduced to dirt in the least and black gunk in the worst. But there was always water somewhere and when water mixed with the black greasy mess in the sun shone on it just right, it would give off those magic rainbow hues that you captured so visually both in the poem and in the photograph.

Kudos!

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 5, 2021
this so timely and well done Odin, a keeper