Zachariah 4
December 24, 1843
London, England
Dawn
Thick plumes of dense smoke roiling upward further blackening their exposed skin, the three working chimneys rained particles of black soot mixed with sleet and rain upon the boy and man.
Hunching their bodies forward into the wind, they made their way to the fourth—currently inoperable—chimney that, as the other three ran from the floor of the factory, three stories below, to the roof, and twenty feet higher.
Huddling as best they could out of the weather alongside the leeward side of the chimney, “Com’er, boy, let’s make ya ready.
Screenplay
EXT. FACTORY CHIMNEY - DAY 8 The wind howls around the chimney as we move around it to a set of metal rungs. Sleet falls. Zachariah is climbing the rungs, shivering as much from fear as cold. A tool belt made of rope has been tied around Zachariah’s waist, from which a metal scraper and a large stiff bristled brush hang on strings. The coiled rope has been fashioned into a harness.
...Huddling as best they could out of the weather alongside the leeward side of the chimney, “Com’er, boy, let’s make ya ready.”
Unslinging the rope, the boy let it drop to the deck.
Taking one end of the rope, Johnson fashioned double loops.
Zachariah slipped one leg through each loop.
Johnson pulled upward, then slackened so the rope didn’t cut into the boy’s groin. He then ran the rope up Zachariah’s back, to just beneath his arms and made another, larger loop that the boy slipped over his head and arms so the rope now formed a harness that held Zachariah by each thigh, around his chest, and under his arms.
Opening the toolbox, Johnson removed a rope belt holding a scraping tool and a hard bristled brush by means of twine loops attached to the rope belt through holes in the handles of both tools. Tying the belt around the boy’s waist... “Ya looks fit ‘n’ ready.”
Pretending encouragement to cover his own fear, “Let’s make for it!” the man said, slapping the boy on the rump.
Standing directly beneath the imposing chimney, looking upward, squinting against the rain, sleet and falling soot, the structure looking far taller than its twenty visible feet.
Zachariah gloomily nodded his head and, reaching upward, took hold of the first frigid iron rung, then—the boy first, the man following—both began to climb.
Hand over hand.
One small, filthy, chafed fist closing around one wet, cold, rusted rung… one after another.
Hand over hand.
Higher. Higher.
A strong gust of wind…
Never admitting to having a God. Never calling on his God except when ‘His ‘ name was used as an expletive, or, most usually — as now, when in terror...
“ ‘Christ’! Oh, ‘Christ’!”
Hanging on tightly, Johnson screwed his eyes shut as…
Never in a church. Other than an occasional quick, ‘Godly’ lecture by a well-meaning household servant, not aware that one as lowly as himself — In Johnson’s mind, other than the helpless, terrified boy climbing above him, no one as lowly as himself could have a God, but wishing he had a God, as...
“Oh, Lordy, Lordy!” His eyes wide open, the boy hung on tightly as…
…The structure swayed.
Their arms held through the steel rungs directly opposite their faces, the man and boy hanging on by their crooked elbows till…
Till ‘finally’, after an hour that lasted no more than seven seconds, the strong wind somewhat abated, and…
The fear no more on this day than on the two previous days when they’d begun this job.
Breathing deeply, blinking a number of times to bring moisture back onto his eyes. Zachariah's blood appearing redder than normal against the black of his skin. Three knuckles on one hand and two from the other bleeding from where they’d scraped on rusted rungs. I must! His mind repeating, I must, I must, I must! Hating ‘having to’, Zachariah started up again.
A few rungs lower, feeling a cough building in his chest, Johnson closed his eyes and concentrated on, Don’t cough! Don’t cough! Turning his head he looked down and seeing the barely noticeable but definite careening motion of the chimney, quickly closed his eyes again and, if at all possible, tightened his arms even tighter. Hugging the rung even closer, he brought his face back to the level of the bricks directly before him.
If at any time Johnson felt pity for the boy it was now, because of all the things he hated, Johnson hated this the most: the height, the wind, the cold! He looked up; the boy was almost to the top. Swallowing his fear, along with the urge to cough, putting his foot onto the next rung, hesitating, letting go, loosening and lifting one arm, Johnson began to climb again.
He was there. Zachariah had reached the top, and now—of all the dreadful things in the boy’s formidable existence—what he ‘had’ to do , what he ‘must’ do next was the most frightful.
A step beneath the boy, locking one arm around the rung, Johnson grabbed hold of the dangling rope that hung from the boy’s back and, using one hand, bringing a few feet of it through two rungs— forming a sort of pullu, said, “Zach, boy...” his teeth clicking with cold, with fear. “...get on with ya. Ya knows I can’t tie ya down till you’re onto it!”
Up this high, the winds blew stronger and almost constantly.
Waiting a moment, Please! Praying to his unknown God, Please! Another moment, waiting, hoping the wind would slacken, but…
The command coming from a few feet below, “Zachariah, ‘do it’!”
The wind did not slacken, and slowly, I must! Slowly, his heart thumping, Please! Ever so slowly, I must! Lifting one foot off his lower rung… the other foot, hesitantly, slowly following the first. Please! I must! He climbed the last three rungs… Till his head and shoulders rose above the crown of the chimney. His heart thumping so hard the boy thought it might leave his chest...His head and shoulders above the crown of the chimney, “ ‘Lordy’!”
His upper body above the minimal protection the brick structure allowed. I must, the boy was buffeted by more wind, by more rain, by more sleet. His teeth clacking with cold, in fear, his chest and hips rose slowly above the circular structure, and now Zachariah's entire body rocked by wind, fearfully, using all the willpower he possessed, the fingers of his left hand opened slowly as he released the top rung…
Quickly now, stretching his body and reaching across the width of the circular flue, Zachariah grasped the support rung on the opposite side and, his bleeding knuckles turning white with the strain of holding on, “ ‘Lordy’! ‘Lordy’!” Pulling the rest of his body upward, he lay face down across the hollow, black hole of the chimney.
The back of his long-coat ballooning upward and the tail of his scarf blowing backward, the cold wind forcing tears from the slits of his eyes, sleet slicing his face, the boy hung on for his life.
A few feet below, hanging on for his life also, one elbow locked through a rung, playing out just enough rope to allow for the boy’s movement. “Lad… Lad, careful, boy.” Speaking quietly, more to himself than to the boy, whispering, as though were he to speak aloud it might upset his and Zachariah’s precarious positions.
The wind worse now. The fear even greater than on the two previous days.
Carefully! “Lordy!” The boy’s one-word prayer being sucked from his lips. Turning his body, “Lordy!” Pulling himself up, sitting up, lifting his legs he put them into the flue.
“Lordy!” Fully exposed now, just barely able to hold onto the lip of the chimney with one hand and the support rung with the other…
The wind gusts. The tall, cylindrical structure swayed and the boy wanted to close his eyes, but was afraid.
Another gust nearly blowing him over, his throat dry, unable to speak, bending to the side he looked down, at Johnson.
“Good lad!” Testing the rope once again, making sure it was woven through and firmly wound around two rungs.
“Aye, boy! Do it!”
Quickly now! Wanting to be through with it…
Releasing the support rung and sliding off the chimney’s edge, Zachariah dropped into the black hole and fell four feet until, biting into his groin, grabbing at his shoulders as, the slack playing out of the rope tightened about the boy’s body and the sudden halting of his fall swung him to the side where he hit the wall with enough force to cause the breath to push from his lungs leaving Zachariah to hang near sixty feet above the flue’s base.
Climbing the four rungs upward till his head and shoulders rose above the crown of the chimney, feeling the winds full force, “Christ!” Leaning into it, Johnson peered into the black hole.
Hearing the expletive, Zachariah looked up.
The top of his head four feet from daylight, such as it was, his clothing and the skin of his face melding with the cylindrical black wall, Zachariah’s eyes were the only bright spots within sight.
Shouting to be heard above the wind. “Ya set, boy?”
“Aye.” Spoken with minimal enthusiasm and conviction.
Flexing his fingers a number of times, trying to regain the circulation in his cramped hand. “Aye,” Johnson repeated as, leaning across the flue, he took an additional hitch around the support rung, then stepping down two rungs, he released the hitch on the rope from the lower rung and, making a large loop, ran it beneath the rung and upward forming an effective makeshift pulley.
Reaching behind his back Johnson took a small lantern that had been hanging from his belt, then stepping one rung upward again, leaning into the flue, precariously hanging from his mid-section, he clipped the lantern to the rope about a foot above the boy’s head. Leaning a bit further into the chimney, shielding it from the wind as best he could, striking a match, putting it in the lantern the wick sputtered, burned a moment, then ignited.
Rotating in a tight circle, the lantern light cast circling shadows of the boy’s revolving body.
Out of the wind-driven sleet and rain, in the comparative warmth of this closely confined place, a feeling of comparative comfort came to the boy, but he’d been here twice before and knew that this sense of comfort was temporary as…
“‘ere we go!”
Tilting his head upward, still leaning into the chimney,Zachariah looked at the silhouetted half-figure of Johnson and, knowing where he was going “Aye.” The boy looked downward as…
Inch by inch he is lowered into the narrow, black depth.
Looking upward, the circle of gray light from the sky above becoming smaller as…
...Foot by foot Zachariah is lowered until the light above is but a pinpoint, as below…
The blackness becomes larger…
...Larger, until below is all there is, and…
The lower and deeper the boy is lowered, the more frightened he becomes, as rotating, What if…
Rotating in half turns, his swaying, slowly turning body casting eerie shadows upon the round wall of this closely confined, ever-revolving tomb. And, What if, thinking…
The boy’s brain telling him he is safe, But…
He knows that so long as his master held the rope he was safe, But…
But, he thought, what if while ‘e’s ‘oldin’ me, what if while ‘e’s lowerin’ me, what if while ‘e’s ‘oldin’ the rope while ‘e’s’ lowerin’ me, ‘e starts in to cough an’ lets go? What if while‘e’s lowerin’ me a wind comes an’ blows ‘im off’a the chimney? What if ‘e’s still mad at me ‘cause I asked for the baby cat an’ ‘e lets go’a the rope?
Zachariah looked up, to the speck of light. ‘Lout’! Berating himself. ‘e ain’t gonna let go’a the rope an’ I ain’t gonna fall!
The boy looked down… to ‘nothing’.
“I ain’t gonna fall!” Zachariah said aloud.
Lowering…
‘whooooo’… ‘whooooo’
Moaning as though in pain. Blowing over and across the mouth of the flue, the wind playing its one, ‘whoooo’ continually hollow note.
‘whisk’ … ‘whisk’
The rustle of his swaying, slightly rotating body upon the bricks.
Fearful now of the sounds about him. The boy heard the whispered ‘whisk’ … ‘whisk’… ‘whisk… of his clothing upon the cylindrical wall and the ‘whooooo’… ‘whooooo’ … ‘whooooo’… of the moaning wind and his eyes opened wider… wider as, looking down, trying to penetrate the darkness.
Tis only brick ‘n mortar, he told himself. Tis only brick ‘n mortar! Tain’t nothin’. Attempting to convince himself, Nothin’!
The moaning wind. The eerie shadows. The whisk of his body, and the acidic odors of damp soot and ash.
Imagination mixing with claustrophobic fear, Tain’t nothin’… Nothin’!
Zachariah became damp with sweat and an internal coldness penetrated his clothing. Trembling, he wrapped his arms about his chest as...
Lowering inch-by inch…
lowering foot-by-foot.
Lowering so slowly…
Until...
SCREENPLAY
EXT. FACTORY CHIMNEY - DAY 8 The wind howls around the chimney as we move around it to a set of metal rungs. Sleet falls. Zachariah is climbing the rungs, shivering as much from fear as cold. A tool belt made of rope has been tied around Zachariah’s waist, from which a metal scraper and a large stiff bristled brush hang on strings. The coiled rope has been fashioned into a harness. The sack full of cloths and bags, is tied to the belt, it serves in part as a cushion against the inner chimney wall. Johnson is about twelve feet below the boy, coughing.
The Climbing Boy 10. ON JOHNSON: Struggling to hold on, sleet blowing into him, he can’t stop coughing. He fearfully hugs the rung before him, while trying to control his coughing. The rope becomes taught. JOHNSON STOP! - old on ya beggar! Lord almighty gimme strength. The rope slackens. Johnson continues coughing until at last he spits a gob of phlegm. Gasping for air he slowly climbs again. Dangling from a rope around his waist is a lantern swinging in the wind.
ON ZACHARIAH: Z belt, it serves in part as a cushion against the inner chimney wall. Johnson is about twelve feet below the boy, coughing.
The Climbing Boy 10. ON JOHNSON: Struggling to hold on, sleet blowing into him, he can’t stop coughing. He fearfully hugs the rung before him, while trying to control his coughing. The rope becomes taught. JOHNSON STOP! - old on ya beggar! Lord almighty gimme strength. The rope slackens. Johnson continues coughing until at last he spits a gob of phlegm. Gasping for air he slowly climbs again. Dangling from a rope around his waist is a lantern swinging in the wind.
ON ZACHARIAH: Zachariah closes his eyes, hugs the rung and prays. ZACHARIAH Lordy get me up ere. Don’t let im fall or I’ll… Zachariah is startled by a sharp tug on the rope. J
OHNSON (O/C) Go on wiv ya! Get up there boy! Zachariah obeys. His eyes barely open he reaches the top of the...
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