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PIT2/2: Lita and Barbara?
by Mark M Lichterman
Thursday, January 6, 2022

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     The ebony-colored girl was small, about five-three, and maybe fifteen years old. She had a thin, Caucasian nose with wide, flaring nostrils, sensuous—though not overly, by Mitchell’s standards—full lips and, for a girl her size, unusually large breasts. Her almond-shaped black eyes looking up from under long, thick lashes. “Hi.” she said.

 PIT2/2: Lita and Barbara?

Points in Time 2

Westlake Village, Ca.

January 3, 2010

We have considered the eligibility of three of the five major loves in the life of Mitchell Lipensky; of course, Mitchell having no idea this life changing process is being considered and will be in total shock once the course of his future life and the woman he will share it with is revealed.

However, at this time the writer will also be in shock so we might as well go on to see where and to who it will lead us to.

Lita Warner was first seen… Literally seen as she walked the three steps into the swimming pool at at Elysium Fields on…

Sunday, May 11, 1986

11:05 AM

Remaining in the water for about twenty minutes, about to head back to his spot on the grass when… ‘Oh, God’!

To describe what and who Mitchell saw… ‘Thought’ he saw we must go back a number of years to…

Chicago, Illinois (* Becoming: 7/6/51)

The ebony-colored girl was small, about five-three, and maybe fifteen years old. She had a thin, Caucasian nose with wide, flaring nostrils, sensuous—though not overly, by Mitchell’s standards—full lips and, for a girl her size, unusually large breasts. Her almond-shaped black eyes looking up from under long, thick lashes. “Hi.” she said.

He had watched her from three stories up, especially when she ran the bases, and thought she was pretty then but, close up, God, she’s beautiful! His eyes flicking from her face to her chest, Mitchell saw that Louise was not wearing a bra, and could actually see the clearly defined, circular projections of her nipples under the tightly stretched, white cotton T-shirt.

Swallowing, forcing himself to keep from licking his lips when introduced by Junior Johnson... (*Becoming 65: A Black Kid) ...sensing a tightening in his crotch as his thumping heart pumped blood downward, the dual thoughts of the dark intensity of her nipples and, if her pubic hair matched the tight nap of the hair on her head, simultaneously flitted through his mind and, Oh, God! I’d love to see her naked! I’d love to fuck her!

That fourteen year old black girl became Mitchell’s ‘hand held’ love for an indefinable period of time and there, then — thirty-five years later, of course ‘not the girl in the ally’, is the very image of Mitchell Lipensky’s long lost sexually desired love that very quickly was accepted and became … As we shall see, eventually with the complete approval of Marsha — the eighth member of the ‘group’ of eight at Elysium Fields nudist park.

(*PIT#34: A New Member)

Barbara Lomgford: The Unseen Woman.

(*GON [Getting Old Now] Series)

July,1998

Never thinking he would… Never expecting to, he found that he did enjoy certain types of poetry…

Though he had never tried writing poetry himself…

Yet...

Discovering that he enjoyed writing shirt stories… (*GON 1: The Writer&Poet ) Barbara and Mitchell had been conversing with each other through an author’s web site, via the internet, for three months and, after the first month of proper poet, author, friendly enough but fairly formal back and forth mostly positive criticism of each other’s work, the tone of their Emails changed from, what one might refer to as, well… friendly/formal, to what one might refer to as, minimally, flirtatious and soon went beyond ‘minimally’ as in some of their written conversations, he knew that he did, and thought she had a hard time skirting the word ‘honey’.

Getting old now.

At age, sixty-four then, possibly a bit lonely or possibly… More than a bit ‘possibly’ wanting to feel a sense of connection to a woman again, even if Mitchell did not physically know the woman… Or even what she looked like as Barbara had not posted a picture of herself on her ‘Authors Home Page’ as he and most other members of the ‘Writers Place’ website.

In a short time, more than a few times the word “love”

slipped into their long distance conversations, which could have been deleted...

But wasn’t.

Westlake Village, California

7/25/98

3:32 PM

Hoping to hear from he he’d been checking his computer when there was an Email from Barbara.

beachbaby.global.com

Hi, honey. Something pretty good has happened today. I’m going to be in and out, so let me know when you’re home and I’ll write right back, if I’m home.

Lippy1.fatboy.net

Hi, baby. Got in a few minutes ago and just got your message. I’m glad that something goo happened to you today, you deserve it. So tell me!

beachbaby.global.com

You remember ‘Writers Place’ publishing that article about the national poetry contest in Chicago?

Lippy1.fatboy.net

Of course! Don’t tell me you’ve been…

Barbara’s message coming back before he could finish

beachbaby.global.com

“Yes! I’m one of our three finalists and have already talked to Chuck and asked my sister if she’s watch mom for the three days…

Lippy1.fatboy.net

And?

beachbaby.global.com

I’m all set and wondered if you’d like to...

Commentary

Three months earlier when ‘writersplace.net’, their authors web site had begun to look for the three most popular, most widely followed commercially unpublished poets, apparently Barbara Lomgford’s name came up and the three are invited to a poetry competition in Chicago to each read, depending on length, two or three of their favorite poems, the prize being the hard back publishing of the winners first book of poetry along with a guaranteed placement in at least one major book marketing chain.

***

Mitchell was an older, sixty-four year old man and Barbara was forty-four; twenty years his junior.

To Mitchell Barbara was a young woman.

Never expecting their imaginations to take them to where their long distance masturbatory sexual fantasy would – Three thousand miles separating them, Barbara and Mitchell made love…

He and Barbara had made long distance, had hand held, hand generated vicarious sex with each other.

Three thousand miles distance one from the other, Barbara Langford and Mitchell Lipensky ‘had’ fucked… in — I’d say a semi-personal way.

Still… ‘What the hell does she look like’?

If she wanted no one at ‘writers place’ to know what she looked like, okay! He didn’t understand ‘why’, but why not post a picture directly him through an Email?

Ugly as hell? Fat as hell? Hell, she may even have two heads.

Guess he’s going to find out.

3:38

Lippy1.fatboy.net

“Is your husband going to Chicago with you?”

beachbaby.global.com

No. Chuck has absolutely no interest in my writing, or anything I do.

Lippy1.fatboy.net

Tell you what, as your greatest rooter, would you mind if I joined you in Chicago?

*** From three thousand miles and the other end of the country came an immediate answer.

beachbaby.global.com

That’s what I wanted to ask you, Mitchell. I would ‘love’ to have you join me in Chicago!

****

What the hell does she look like?

Mitchell Lipensky did find out.

Far from Beautiful, not even what some guys would consider as ‘cute’. Far from ugly Barbara Longford was ‘plain’.

Not skinny, not fat. Actually appearing as a bit ‘matronly’. Barbara Longford turned no man’s head.

Non the less, what turned out to be a ‘Three Day Lifetime’ for Barbara and Mitchell, when within this seventy-two hours Mitchell Lipensky learned another axiom : ‘Beauty is only skin deep’ for Barbara was one of those extremely rare people that extruded an aura of internal warmth. That beyond what was outwardly observed was a sense of well-being, an inwardly luminous humanistic sense of love…

And Mitchell Lipensky did love Barbara. Loved her ‘with all his heart’.

And Barbara sensing … Considering herself a totally unbecoming, middle aged women within an unloving, childless marriage loved Mitchell also, with all her heart.

January 3, 2010

So here I am. A writer that thus far cannot bring forth the woman…

As ‘Susan Friedman’, the girl when last observed was but sixteen years of age, Susan, now seventy-five years old is obviously out of the picture…

However, as this is a factional, semi fictional and in many cases a totally ‘fictional’ series anything, I suppose, could happen.

Considering...

First there was Susan that throughout fifty-nine years still remained in Mitchell Lipensky’s mind and memory as an unbelievably beautiful, young ‘Elizabeth Taylor’— How fortunate for this now old lady.

Marsha… Dark complected, tall and slender, appearing to Mitchell as the picture of a beautiful, young native born Israeli ‘Sabra’, that… Unknown at the time of first meeting (* Becoming:41:Meeting Girls ) Mitchell had loved Marsha and throughout their married years, had tried hard to continue to love her right up until…

‘Elizabeth Herzon’:

Why’s she got to be so damned beautiful? Mitchell thought for at least the thousandth time since meeting Elizabeth Herzon and, for at least twice as many times, Mitchell sensed the… that well known longing sensation in the lower region… the far lower region of his stomach.

Being Transco Envelope Company’s first female salesman—saleswoman?—considered an experiment, at age twenty-one, Elizabeth Herzon had long, dark blonde, honey colored streaked hair, a beautiful round face with large, green eyes and a crooked smile that warmed everyone it came in contact with.

Standing a bit above 5' 5", weighing approximately one hundred twenty-five pounds, with vital statistics of 38-32-38, Elizabeth had the kind of figure that turned men’s heads, especially the head of the young man that sat directly across from her.

Yes! Knowing men followed her with their eyes had raised Elizabeth’s ego and yes, further knowing they looked longingly had sent her estimation of herself—compared to what her estimation of herself had always been before—soaring into the stratosphere because Elizabeth Herzon had always been…

Unknown to all but her family and a few remaining friends, Elizabeth had always been….

“Oy, such a punnum! Such a beautiful face!” Her mother and father and aunts and uncles would say. “Such a shame she’s so…

“Fat!”

Westlake Village, Ca.

January 3, 2010

Other than a brief history into the character of the one girl and four women in Mitchell Lipensky’s life; one of whom will possibly reappear in the next episode is not meant to reiterate what has been written as all can be found in ‘Becoming’, ‘For Better or worse’ .Amazon & Amazon Prime’ and if so desired, in paper back editions. Also in the first PIT (Points in Time) series.

The writer will, though, give the time and reasons for the cause of separation in all five relationships to better understand the motivations of …? Actually It was Mitchell himself that caused the life changing ‘break-off’ with two of his potential lifers partners.

 

PIT2/3: Reasons & Results.

 

 

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 1/18/2022
I seem to have read this, but not commented. Probably one of those interruptions and other connexions that kept me away for so long and having to catch up with my reading and commenting.

A plethora of distaff for you to sort through. But I believe you already know we are leaning toward. Like my brother, now playing the Internet field, he has found companions to join him at various events, but this winter he could not find one to travel with him to Florida and get out of one of those northern Indiana, near Chicago, winters for a while. Feeling quite empty going there alone.

Ron
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel) 1/8/2022
Remembering all the lovers that he had in the past. I hope Mitchell will find someone special among them. People change when they matured.

Sandie
Reviewed by Eva Pasco 1/7/2022
In my opinion, Marsha doesn't deserve to be in the arena.

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