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Ahead Walks the Past
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Monday, August 8, 2022
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Times of chaos and challenge can be the most spiritually powerful… if we are brave enough to find solace and rest in their space of uncertainty. (Image by pinterest)


 

Ahead Walks the Past

 

A summer evening’s walk around Greenwich Village was his habitual nightly vow.

His appearance was always that of someone listening to his thoughts,

even as his eyes would occasionally wander from sidewalk to overhead trees,

limbs bent over the crumbling curbside rendering them as steep staircases slowly descending with the passing night into tomorrow’s day.

 

A moment’s hesitation as uplifted eyelids reveal trembling leaves

like the memory of his once ageless mother realizing she too was getting old.

With the subtle wind, he perceives voices whispering high above the visible quiver

of tree-breaths as they gasp knowing such dampening air

foreshadows the early temperate winds of a distant storm building,

or perhaps a huge mouth wanting to burst forth with stifled laughter,

nature being the stealthy humorist it was at times.

 

Such were the discernments on this sultry evening’s stroll

amongst brownstones of the rich, fire-escape facades of the artists

and the inevitable newspaper-covered indigent

finding solace in a bodega’s storefront alcove.

 

Ahead, he would suddenly come upon a long-ago evening,

where he, by chance, met a happy heart

draped in a tie-dyed moo-moo, swaying innocently

across her bare feet, the hand-made sandals swinging from her fingertips

and golden unpinned hair cascading across her humid soaked shoulders.

 

On this night…

 

Such would jettison his melancholy

into hurried pursuit before recall disappeared

into the shadows of unfulfilled dreams.

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 9, 2022
Delving into the memory of a mythical place that I found in 1968 while strolling there on a hot humid night, didn't exist, at least to the unschooled Midwestern minds of us who walked there hoping to find beatniks still spouting strange poems in a smoky, coffeehouse atmosphere.

Your flash fiction is a collection of images that one could find strolling Manhattan on a hot, humid, night in your dreams. But when the hippie girl in the tie-dyed mumu appears, your dream moves from the past into the future as you pursue what you lost so long ago with newfound vigor she generates in your mind's eye.

When those images appear in my dreams, I go for it. A good story may emerge from it or one I'm too embarrassed to write. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 8, 2022
The miracle of Greenwich Village is that it is not really a village, not really a place, but a state of mind, beautifully expressed here at the beginning of the poem. Nothing is as unique as a backdrop to unfolding life as this Greenwich Village, there on the fringe of the Hudson, where dreams unfold that are waiting to be fulfilled. Such richness in this place poem.