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5 and 10 Cent Store
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Sunday, June 11, 2023
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Yes, there was once a much simpler life… one with modest rewards that were so appreciated.

 

5 and 10 Cent Store

 

Maybe I remember ‘cause…

Everyday was a holiday
At Woolworth’s 5 and 10 Cent Store.
Colored things were floor-to-ceiling,
Holding fast the lingering scents of popcorn,
American grilled cheese sandwiches,
Salt Water Taffy and fudge squares,
Clashing with parakeet and hamster living.
They were in the back where the little kids’ zoo was.

Maybe ‘cause…

Life-size cardboard Hopalong Cassidy
And Gene Autry cutouts hung from fishing lines,
Wrapped round roof nails.
Five and Dime treasures dangling over
Kid literature my dad called them
Five cent comic books right next to
Licorice and malt-ball canisters.

And just up the aisle,
Grandma’s favorite counter
Where she’d always buy her special envelopes--
Light blue par avion with printed airplanes.
I’d lift my chin up to the edge,
Stare at those airplanes
And dream. Wow, how I dreamed.

Maybe I was collectin’ make believe
for when…

Oh, how Mom and Dad, Grandpa and Grandma
Loved to drive the Model A into town,
Saunter up to the Five and Dime counter,
Order a turkey dinner,
Or liver and onions,
And then stare so long…
So long they’d stare into
Their empty coffee cups,
While I slurped my root beer.
I could make a root beer last forever
You know?

Mama bought a lampshade once,
The crimped accordion-kind,
Along with those lacy see-through curtains.
“Par-cale,” I think she called them.
Never did understand their purpose.
What good’s a curtain you can see through?

And home,
When they were hung,
They’d lift and float straight out
When the windows were open.
Our cows and chickens would chorus up
Join me to laugh and the dancing curtains.
See-through-lift-up curtains.
Made no sense.

Maybe…
Maybe that’s how they all
Wanted to be remembered
Mama, Dad, Grandma and Grandpa.
I don’t know.

Now I sit in my car
Gaze across the street
Where the twenty-story
Glass and steel office building.
Erected where the old Five and Dime
Held so many good times.

Maybe I drove here ‘cause…

I needed to finger some nickels and dimes
In the pant pocket of my Armani suit
Gaze and remember the sweet smells and jellybean colors.
When gettin’ happy and stayin’ happy was so easy.

Back then.


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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 15, 2023
Yeah.... like Saint Patrick's Cathedral in Mid-town Manhattan. When I was 11, right before my family moved to San Diego, we lived in Mt. Prospect, Illinois. Lions Park Elementary was directly across the street, and across the park, on one of the street corners, was a drug store with a soda counter, and those high stools you could spin around on. My favorite meal in those days was grilled cheese and tomato soup. Like you.... there are some memories that have never faded, and are as real today, as they were then. Enjoyed reading this very much. Read it twice actually. Stirred up many memories. Well done. r

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 11, 2023
We had competition in town. Both Kresge and Woolworth. You have a much greater remembrance of all the things those two five and dime stores offered than I remember. I don't remember lunch counter. Kresge became K-Mart that has been eclipsed by Target and Woolworth hung on until it finally died somewhere near the start of the 21st century. Lately I've noticed that the dollar stores are going out of business and probably will be replaced by five dollar stores while the question whether not to keep the penny with copper in it worth more than 1˘ for the Treasury to continue minting them.

Thanks so much for the romp down Main Street. I sure smelled the popcorn.

Ron