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· Truth is One


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Freeing Twirly Things
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Saturday, July 22, 2023
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Some flash fiction memories of our youth when so many unexpected moments of discovery and the “wow factor” are seemingly forever present. Then we grew up and…


 

Freeing Twirly Things


Loneliness,
The ever-aware sadness never knowing,
Did stumble about untouched
Awaiting enigma’s shadow
To enter into the light.

Came that special day
It did awaken,
As curled atop summer grass
The young boy made simple discovery.

So unadorned came the moment,
As laying upon his back,
A mere release of breath
Sent dandelion umbrellas afloat,
Their landing a graceful message upon his chest…

“Awaken your heart,”
Did they whisper,
“For challenge awaits
beyond youthful innocence.”

So many years trailed behind,
Where among trampled grasses of trial and error
Memory’s favorite messenger,
This weed of delicate flight,
Remained his companion of conscience,
Childhood’s compassionate gift.

How precious was discovery,
Introduced once as a gently landing twirly thing,
Quietly delivering a weathered warrior called love,
Life's protection for man's vulnerable tenderness...
Within.
   



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 22, 2023
The bane of green lawn zealots, the lowly dandelion propagates its seeds with fairy parachutes borne on the wind. We all blew the seeds off with abandonment, just to watch them fly. They made great greens and dandelion wine.

And I remember those twirly helicopter seeds.

Don't see those things much anymore. But their memory is still strong.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 22, 2023
Young, curious, and cheerfully drawing breath. Everything was a wonder when I was a kid. And without a doubt, challenge is always there for those who purpose to continue seeking out the mysteries. Even now, there are still some pretty cool discoveries to be had. I am always thankful for those deep gulps of fresh clean creative air. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by A. Frailey
Reviewed on July 22, 2023
Beautiful, Odin. The child within remains one of our strongest and healthiest advocates. Thanks for sharing this reminder.