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The Perpetual Itch
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Sunday, July 23, 2023
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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A flash-fiction exploration into the seemingly never-ending “enough is never enough” syndrome. (Image by Tim Wilson)


 

The Perpetual Itch

 

Or…

 

Keeping up with the Joneses

It felt things coming,
The undeniable bottom feeder reality,
Where thought had no credulity,
Where irrational emoting ruled,
Void of mind’s prep,
Blind of light’s revealing purpose.

Such remained
This well rehearsed and produced
Pulp life infestation.

It remembered…

Once many clambered to the Grecian marble steps,
Where dreams born of teachings
Promised delivery of reward.
But today,
All that is found
Is perpetuation of schoolyard practices,
Where bullying,
Mocking,
And “my dick is bigger than your dick” war-cries
Intimidating life’s playground with slippery slopes.

Down 5th Avenue,
Up Park Avenue,
The viral contaminants parlay their wears,
A far more contagious disease than Ebola.

And it knows…

Unlike a possible cure for a biological virus,
This consumerism equation seems without solution,
Given little of non-material worth remains
Visible on the species’ blackboard mess.

Today’s squirming parade of absence
Is dominated by the pounding of urban-warrior chests,
Of Armani jackets atop unlaced “made-to-look-raunchy” boots,
Courting the strut of Barbie Doll dreams
Clicking attention with stiletto heels
Beneath ripped shorter than short-short insecurity.

On it spreads,
Past the Wall Street reviewing stands,
Where unlike the fickle nature of society’s infection,
Market makers understand a fever’s ups and downs,
Vulnerability’s capricious norm endorsing today’s
Debauchery fashion to Trump taste,
Loudness to drown out worthy music,
Shock to shatter the true awe of discovery,
And excellence to continue its desperate clinging,
As mediocrity’s narcissistic sell-off
Creates another closing-bell windfall.

The pestilence holds firm its lock on discernment’s immune system,
Mutating daily into mind-shrinking captivity,
A synaptic virulence rapidly rendering this once simple discomfort
Into a rapacious itch that will never realize a cure.

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 23, 2023
Most people seem to have it--the trend following consumer itch. It never resonated with me. I have lived most of my life with hand-me-downs that lasted a long time, including clothing, kitchen supplies and furniture. Never buying to keep up with the latest sellers' pitch, but only from necessity, and then, the bare minimum rather than the brand.

While closets, storage lockers, attics, garages and landfills burst at the seams with all of our cast-off fashion and wasted expense, a few well used antiques can grace a home nearly forever without all that clutter and waste from the evil of addiction to shopping. There is something special about the simple life, not chasing other peoples' dreams, but enjoying the free things in life, nature, friendship and love.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 23, 2023
Love the play on words here, indeed enough never seems to be enough.