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Perfect Key
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Monday, September 4, 2023
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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How rewarding it is to believe one has a capacity, a kind of patience with life rewards that can persist right up and through the tenacity of one’s final breath. (Painting by Tokens)

 

Perfect Key

 

In an old cigar box in his ethereal bureau drawer,

He remained hopeful with this one key of many

From his mind’s junkshop collection of pass keys

 

As he gazed at the dresser’s mirror reflecting a wrinkled pale face

Surrounding a feverish contemplative “why,”

This one key’s yet-to-rust shiny surface stared back at him.

 

The rest of his imagined world afforded

A view of the backyard of years past

Where now but one leafless tree

Remained loyal as the sacrificial caretaker.

 

Today he didn’t know why…

 

But clouds found solace in the fading horizon

As lightning echoes of past encores

Ejected salty rivulets from his eyes

Down his withered cheeks,

Onto a final resting place

And the beginning erosion

Of the only remaining unscathed key

In the box of tearfully rusted skeletons to nowhere.

 

Oh, how he yearned for a visit from that yet-to-appear untarnished fit,

A fresh opener to the door of his patient heart,

Where honesty and conviction would keep deceit at bay,

Where neither technology or real people might betray

His determined need to trust.

Such were the final thoughts as the doctor called the time of death, 3:20.

 

As the light faded quickly,

He remembered how luminous the sun had been that afternoon,

How the key glistened in that final moment of hope.

 

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 5, 2023
A nice mind trip at the point of no returning. And they do call them "skeleton" keys. I did often wonder, but never looked it up why they were called that. Suppose that I could now.

Nicely done, as you contemplate and we all contemplate, as we get older, what it will be like when we get that close to the inevitable. Really do wonder if the afternoon sun will indeed, "shine much brighter" as my eyes dim and partially close as my end approaches. Or will it just be a surprise pain that is so intense my body and mind can't take it.

But it's nice to speculate…

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 5, 2023
Several triggers in this piece for me. The 'perfect key' image. Perhaps the passe-partout (the skeleton key) that allows entry everywhere. Also brought to mind a character in 'Around the World in Eighty Days.' The agonist Phileas Fogg's French valet, whose name was Passepartout. Most interesting to me though, was that you chose the numbers 3:20 as the man's time of death. One of the most popular verses in the Book of Revelations is Revelation 3:20. "Behold, I stand at the door and knock. If anyone hears my voice and opens the door, I will come in and eat with that person, and they with me." Another powerfully imaged piece ole friend. Enjoyed. r