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Hand-Me-Down Death Shop
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Saturday, October 7, 2023
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Everyone has a dream or fantasy or flash fiction imagination of that final moment’s image. For others of us, that moment remains pre-mature.

 

Hand-Me-Down Death Shop

 

Over-stock sale of past lives

lures me to the clothing

that might fit my decaying body’s finality.

 

The mannequin doorman dressed in black

greets me as I enter under the tinkling bell,

his eyes unflinching with their Mona Lisa stare at me,

the petals of a boutonniere sporting a plastic carnation

seeming to smile up at his painted mustache,

looking like it was drawn by a cigar’s dead end.

 

So much black

cleaned and pressed,

the frayed collars of their final years shouting

“look at me!”

 

So many shadows seem to rise

ushering my eyes to the light outside

still shining some final hope beyond,

even as the towers of dark pants sway and tilt

vying for their shot at getting attention,

followed by dead men’s hats rolling along the floor,

hurrying to escort me out,

uncanny instinct prevailing,

knowing my failing remains of life

are not ready to be indexed… not yet.

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 7, 2023
That's an interesting dream that I have not had yet. A what to wear on my deathbed shop seems somehow preoccupied with appearance of the corpse--well-dressed?

She has given away my old and frayed from work left 12 years now ago. And bought me a whole new set of trousers, shirts and sport coats that I don't wear. And why should I wear them in death? When I will be immediately cremated and perhaps, not allowed to wear clothing for the pollution it would cause burning polyester.

Ron