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Arousing Mountain Crescendos
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Monday, November 6, 2023
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Climbing mountains sometimes creates experiences that resort to dreams and then jettison one into the awakened trans-level of said experience. As I get older, seems they visit me more often. Image pinterest)

 Arousing Mountain Crescendos 


How real your unreal air, 
glistening micro vats of life 
my lungs drink in, 
while wind of your 1st movement 
my ears do transcribe. 

To my left the river''s drum, 
proclaiming the 2nd movement 
skewering silt, 
pulling current across timpani slabs, 
the gray rush of glacial tears 
rushing to final ringlets of chimes 
surrounding burials of 
fixed ropes asunder. 

How many have climbed your podium, 
lifted baton upon sound and eye-scapes transcendent, 
deftly planted movement 
round acaulescent rests of mind 
to experience the suspension of life held taut? 

For some, 
amidst simple breaths, 
crescendos now clash, 
ethereal flames alight, 
know the symphony''s 3rd, 
brilliance of a finish 
but a short distance beyond. 

Preparation and practice sing out, 
beckoning solitude and peace. 

Ropes hold fast. 

Spikes beneath my prod 
deliver me atop. 

The aroused crescendo of merit bows, 
nature applauds, 
my eyes look further 
as pride peers upon another opus of peace, 
seeking peaks yet to climb. 

“Because it''s there,” 
proclaimed of once, 
is not enough for some, 
whose simple melodies 
of harmony''s unease 
layer yet beyond 
more dreams and 
forever reaching a mountain''s next crescendo.

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 6, 2023
I think Richard caught on better, but it wasn't until near the end that I started to get the rhythm of the climb to reach that last thrust to reach the objective summit.

And I had to copy the words and put them into a darker font so that I could read them.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 5, 2023
Musical terminology and mountain climbing- quite an ingenious pairing. Yes indeed: Cadence and activity. Melody and motion. Sound and physicality. Rhythm and exercise. Harmony and locomotion. Sonance and kinetics. Much to take from the surface of this write, and even more in the subtext. "Ropes hold fast" indeed. Enjoyed. Bravo. r