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Spider World
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Monday, September 2, 2024
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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For most of us, spiders in the attic pose a problem of learned fear, when they only want to live in their insect-style house arrest.

 Spider World

 

 

Dust motes float in the still air

Of a dimly let attic.

 

Shadows stay fixed

In the mausoleum-like stillness,

Where eight-legged tiny creatures remain

Silent witnesses to time passing.

 

The quiet life within

Affords timeless homes of webs

Delicately spun in corners with patient care.

 

Such intricate homes these,

Spiders of “Welcome Mat” savy

Maintain each strand as a story

A connection binding the past to the now.

 

Deep in the recesses of the storage

Rests old trunks and boxes,

Remnant saves of years gone by,

Their secrets kept safe by tireless sentries.

 

Bluebottle reconnaissance flights

Use their short lives to seek out

The mouse or other rodent death

Their radar has picked up.

 

Circling the webbed danger zones,

 these fearless dive-bombers

make quick research

and return to safer pockets of the attic’s open air

thick with memories,

innocent laughter,

tears of loss,

all the hushed echoes of lives once lived.

 

In this sanctuary of stillness,
Spiders move with purpose,
Their world a tapestry of silk and unsuspecting capture,

For in the attic’s embrace,
Time slows, and the outside world fades,
Leaving only the quiet hum of life,
Spun from the threads of the past.

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 2, 2024
There is nothing more irksome than a spider crawling on you at night when you can't swat it. Or a web used as a tight rope swings across your eye or nose with a kind of itchy willies that it brings you can't brush away… But then, that's just me.

And spiders certainly do have the run of the attic most of the time. And, as far as I know, none of them in the house are poisonous except perhaps, the brown recluse. Forgot about him.

I like the whole concept except for the strange "bluebottle reconnaissance flights?" That escaped my imagination. Perhaps their vision makes them see all blue with compound eyes?

God