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Worn Bristles
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Sunday, September 15, 2024
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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So many commonalities that can muster up a sense of personification. A brief flirtation with flash fiction. (Image by pinterest)

 Worn Bristles

 

In the closet I lean,

Silent and still,

A giving tool with simple needs.

 

With bristles worn from years of use,

I dance the dust and grim across the floors.

My partner Marge the housekeeper holds me tight,

Careful not to press down too hard,

Knowing I, too, am aging.

 

We make the rounds

As she leads me with grace,

Clearing the paths

Through kitchen and hallway,

Bedroom and bath

 

She is of

 gentle sweep,

making sure there is no hurt,

as we both have fond memories

of children growing,

elderly becoming smaller,

cats and dog passing,

leaving behind crumbs and fallen hair,

seasons coming

and going.

 

In the soundless night,

When all is at peace,

I rest in my closet corner,

Knowing my essence is akin to a hardwood tree

Nestled in a landscape of need,

Mindful that even in the mundane,

A tool in need becomes

A dutiful beauty,

A gentle steward of worn bristles.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 16, 2024
That's a very nice personification of a well used broom. Unfortunately, these days they're more likely to be plastic and thrown away every couple of years until replaced by one of those cute little robots that runs around picking up dust, hair and crumbs as it goes merrily on its way until it needs recharging. Conveniently putting the housekeeper out of work.

We had a new little bungalow with hardwood floors from 1955 to 1961 when we moved to a farmhouse that had a linoleum kitchen floor and was carpeted over the old rough wood flooring. I heard mom say, "I'm never having hardwood floors again!" (Too much scrubbing and waxing)

Now everyone wants hardwood floors or their equivalent. Go figure?

Ron