The main thing is the way you had your character change so dramatically from the girl we met at the beginning to the one who know sashays through your pages in such a confident and sensual manner. 10/10 for that
The back-story was told in an economical manner that did not detract from the main premise - 10/10 for that
The sex scenes were handled very well, nothing too dramatic and nothing held back so 10/10 for that
In summation I will return to see just how our Millie Price gets on in the next chapters
Crystal Reed thought she had met the perfect man. Instead she finds herself entangled in a web of obsessive love and dark secrets, a world that has become tainted by deception and treachery.
Shirine McVey discovers that twenty years of her life have elapsed since she went to sleep in a hotel room in El Paso, Texas. And worse, she is married to a man she doesn't know.
