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Wonder Guy
by Naomi Stone   
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Category:  Fantasy
ISBN-10:  1481866893

Pages: 367

Price: $3.99 (eBook)


His fairy godmother grants Greg super powers for the sake of impressing the girl next door...

Sometimes true love needs a little help; that's where the Fairy Godmothers' Union steps in.

Science major Greg Roberts is all formulas and logic. Neither will win him the heart of his lifelong true love, girl next door, Gloria Torkenson. When the Fairy Godmother's Local Union offers to give him super-powers, Greg accepts, hoping to earn a shot at Gloria's love.

After her friend is murdered and her fiancé brushes off her shock and mourning, Gloria begins to see her engagement for what it is: a desperate bid for security. It's Greg who is at her side, comforting her when she needs it most. His natural thoughtfulness and newly emerged confidence capture her attention. But Gloria's desire for stability makes it hard to trust her heart.

With a dark fairy creating chaos, and her minions endangering Gloria, can Greg's gifted super powers be enough to save the world?
 


Excerpt

It had to be a dream. If only. If only she had the refuge of unconsciousness as the bug-eyed monsters lifting her up and the earth fell away below. She had nothing but sympathy for the heroines of old movies who would swoon in the face of danger, but she couldn’t give up. She had to fight for all she was worth. She twisted and tore at the clutching limbs until more creatures secured her arms. She kicked against resilient abdominal segments and scaly exoskeletons. Thrashing wildly, Gloria shouted outrage when she wasn’t screaming in terror.

At least, she struggled until she looked down. The lawns and sculptures spread like a map below her. Far, far below. A fresh wave of vertigo dizzied her. Even if she managed to escape the clutches of her captors, she’d only be dashed to death on the tiled paths or the massive curves of the Henry Moore bronze now directly below. The scene shifted and spun, and now it looked like the Calder would be a good bet for impaling her. The whirling of the scene made her stomach swim in sickening waves. She closed her eyes and stiffened, ceasing her struggles, though she still cringed from the huge limbs holding her.

When she grew still, her captors steadied in flight. With steadier movement and the rush of cool wind in her face, her vertigo eased. She dared to open her eyes again. The mosquitoes, flying in unison, leveled out at last and bent their path as if to head south. Oh, God. Now would be a good time to faint. Where were they taking her?

A figure in gold and green blazed toward them from below.

Wonder Guy! Gloria’s heart leapt in her breast. Oh, thank heaven. Oh, crap. Her hair must look like hell, whipping and tangling around her face in the wind.

In the next instant, with a series of sharp popping noises and a smell she remembered from summer evenings near a bug zapper, the giant mosquitoes lost their holds on Gloria’s arms. She rejoiced and despaired again immediately, falling free toward the earth below. Her stomach lurched, dropping even faster than she fell through the air. The wind dragged at her hair and clothes, stopping her breath. The pervasive drone of wings fell silent and empty husks of giant mosquitoes filled the air, falling with her. The sharp black point of the Calder sculpture’s support rushed to meet them. Gloria screamed.

Strong, gentle arms scooped her up, and she threw her arms around the hero’s strong neck, burying her face in the warm crook below his clean-cut jaw, trembling in relief.

“Hey,” he said. “It’s gonna be okay.”

They swooped through the air, but this was totally different than flying in the grasp of the giant insects. She lost all fear of falling. Wonder Guy cradled her gently against his solid chest, one strong arm hooked under her thighs, the other holding her tightly to him. She clung fiercely, arms clutched around his neck. How could she feel so--contented? blissful?happy?--in the midst of this craziness? Her face pressed close to the bare flesh where his lower face and jaw emerged from his mask. His scent filled her like the breath of home, human, familiar and safe. She checked the urge to nuzzle him, to nibble her way up to his ear. She relaxed, molding herself to the solid wall of Wonder Guy’s body so warm against hers.

They neared the ground, the sound of insect wings growing louder as they descended. The shrill whine, like police sirens on helium, surrounded them.

“Hold on,” Wonder Guy told her, transferring her grip from his neck to what proved to be the stalk of the giant cherry on which she now stood. His arms freed, Wonder Guy turned to face the army of horrendous mosquitoes closing in around them.

Gloria shivered without the warmth of her hero’s arms around her. Oh. The mist of water spraying from the top of the cherry’s stalk might have something to do with her sudden chill. The drone of a thousand insect wings drowned all other thoughts. She clung with a desperate grip to her cherry stem as Wonder Guy flashed from place to place, always between her and the swarming army of mosquitoes.

Like mindless drones, the creatures seemed to have forgotten everything and everyone else to gather their forces and throw themselves against the hero in a determined assault. Their objective seemed to be to get through him, or past him, or around him to reach--her?

This was crazy. Why would these impossible monsters be after her? Gloria trembled in every limb, wet, miserable and frightened out of her wits. If not for the cold of the metal stalk against her cheek or the slick surface beneath the soles of her sandals, she might think it all a dream. This day had become a living nightmare. Only the hero, decimating the onslaught of monsters as she looked on, kept her from giving in to despair.

He moved more swiftly than her eyes could follow. Now in front of her, now above, now to one side, then another. He seemed everywhere at once, and everywhere he turned the mosquitoes died. They fell from the sky like so many giant bags of trash. Luckily, everyone below had already found shelter. She didn’t know how he did it and didn’t care. He faced them and they died, to fall as dry husks to the earth below. They died, but more kept coming.

So many. Some he only blocked by placing his back directly between Gloria and the mosquitoes’ thrusts. Their stabbing proboscises broke against the impenetrable barrier he made of himself.

Her heart stuck in her throat. At least, she assumed the idiom had been coined to cover her present state of breathless, choking anxiety. Her head told her the swarming, bloodthirsty monsters surrounding them couldn’t harm Wonder Guy, but how could anyone keep up this dizzying defense against such a seemingly endless barrage of the enemy?

Gloria lost track of time. Her arms ached from clinging to the giant cherry stem. Her legs wobbled, trying to keep her perch on the scanty, slippery footing afforded on the slick aluminum. Her grip slipped and she lurched near falling while struggling to regain her hold. At last, the cloud of whirring wings thinned to reveal stretches of clear, cerulean sky and the incessant drone faded from a thunder in her ears to a thinner whine. Dead mosquitoes littered the lawn below, clogged the pool, draped across sculptures or piled up around them.

As he flashed like lightning from one point to another, Wonder Guy had been drawn further and further from her position. Now a contingent of the mosquitoes moved quietly below, creeping out of hiding from among the corpses of their fellows, moving in coordination as if controlled by a single mind.

Oh God. As they rose in unison, moving arrow-straight for her, Gloria screamed, mind numb with horror. She shuddered at the thought of them touching her again. Worse, this time they might be out for blood. She pressed close to the cherry stem, squirming around to keep its solid steel between her and the approaching monsters, but they came from every side.

Wonder Guy arrived in the instant, put his broad, impervious back to the squadron of mosquitoes stabbing at them and wrapped his arms around her. Standing behind her, holding her pressed into his chest, the whole length of him held tight along her backside, he gave new meaning to guarding her back.

The shock of impact echoed through his flesh to hers as the first wave of assault broke upon his back.

She realized he’d spoken.

“What?”

“Let go.” He plucked at her arms, still clenched around the cherry stem. Gladly she released it, turning at the urging of his hands to transfer her hold to him. She clasped her arms around his neck, and in the instant her eyes met his, looking out from behind his mask, she forgot her fear and her weariness. A bolt of exhilaration shot through her, an inexplicable joy.

Gloria grinned, letting the world drop away below them. She hardly registered how they’d shot into the sky, leaving mosquito hordes far below. She might never have this chance again. The belly dancers of the world might surround him as soon as they returned to earth, the way they’d done when he’d stopped that rogue elephant in Uptown. She’d have to go back to her life and her work and responsibilities. Right now this magnificent man’s arms wrapped tightly around her and his gaze stayed locked with hers. For the moment he was hers.

His masked face drew close, his breath warm on her mouth. Gloria leaned in, brushed her lips across his chiseled, slightly parted ones, thrilled as they softened and opened beneath her light touch. She bore down, parting her own lips to kiss him in earnest.

Oh Lord. If they weren’t already up among the clouds she’d be flying now. Who knew a kiss had the power to unlock such a rush of sensation, become a whole new dimension of delight? It had never worked that way before. His mouth met hers with equal fervor and with a tenderness melting her from crown to toes.

~*~



Professional Reviews

This may look like just another feel good story, but that is just it's secret identity.
As anyone knows who has been following me, I am a self professed Geek Girl. So whenever I get a chance to read a Superhero book, I am going to jump at it. Add in the fact that our soon to be Superhero Greg is a total geek himself, and I was all set up to really enjoy this read.

The story opens with Gloria and Aggie, Greg's mother, working on improving their latest arts & crafts project. They are manufacturing and selling Cell Shells and have come up with an idea to increase their market share. Gloria's smile manages to short circuit Greg's ability to speak coherently around Gloria and he basically ends up standing there just staring at her. Greg and Gloria have grown up together, as neighbors and friends, but he is sure that he has missed his opportunity to let Gloria know how he really feels about her. After all, she has a fiance, Pete, who soon arrives to pick up Gloria. This leaves Greg in a bit of a funk and needing to head out on a fast and furious bicycle ride. That plan is about to amended, when he meets his fairy godmother. Serafina has arrived at the behest of a wish by Greg's mother. Serafina is part of the Fairy Godmother's Union, True Love Local 521. She tells Greg that she is there to help him in his quest to win Gloria's heart. Gloria just needs to see him in a different light and oh boy does she have a plan for that.

What I really liked about this book, is that the author didn't just take the book into the realm of fluffy feel good reads and drop it off. There was several spots in the story where the issues brought up were thought provoking and really made you consider how you would react in a particular situation. Yes, there was some over the top, fantastical stunts, but the core of this book was about facing down your demons and finding your own moral compass. I started this book thinking it would be a quick, feel good read and ended up questioning and re-examining my own principles. If faced with these situations, how would I handle them? Basically, it was like heading out for an burger and fries and getting a 7 course steak dinner instead.

Another really amazing thing to me were the physics explanations for the "magic" that was happening. It was done with enough technicalities to be understood by our geek Greg, but also simple enough that I could almost follow along. For me this was another one of those stop and consider moments. It is obvious that the author really put a lot of though and planning into making the rules of their world "work". I rarely hand out 5 stars, but this one just really impressed me. I really hope the Ms. Stone continues this work into a series.


Great Characters in a Cleverly Crafted Storyline
As a fan of superheroes I found Wonder Guy to be a delightful read with a unique and memorable premise that brought real-life issues into the world of fantasy. In this story good and evil battle for supremacy using a man who wants nothing more than to win the girl he's always loved. This results in numerous clever and humorous scenes as computer nerd Greg learns to embrace his superhero side and accept the responsibility given to him courtesy of his fairy godmother. Put all this together and you have a roller-coaster journey of action and suspense where all the usual superhero themes get a bit of a twist when true love beats the bad guy in the end.

Greg has always been the reliable one, the one you can always count on but who easily gets taken for granted because of it. He's loved his longtime friend Gloria since they were kids but he's never made a move for fear of rejection. With a single wish to his fairy godmother he's given the chance to win her over but in exchange has to save the world from a cruel entity who preys on darkness and grief. Greg's early attempts at mastering his powers are humorous but deal with heartfelt issues of responsibility too. He just wants to be loved for who he is but his persona soon becomes more powerful than he expected and it will take a simple act of humanity to claim Gloria and their HEA in a heart-pounding and fast-paced conclusion. Greg is charming and heroic both in and out of his costume and his unassuming nature won me over completely.

Gloria's felt alone since the death of her mother at an early age and her father's subsequent fall into the haze of alcoholism. Her only comforts are the old woman she's created an online business with and the woman's nerdy and reliable son Greg, who she considers a close friend. She's always been made to feel as though she was lacking with no hope of getting out of the current rut she's in unless she marries the indifferent Peter. When unexplained events and a masked man give her uneventful life a jolt she rethinks her plans for the future. While staring death in the face she realizes certain truths that have her embracing love close to home which brings her happiness that was missing from the moment we first see her. Gloria is a hard woman to like at times. She's too sarcastic and brittle during the early stages of the story but once true love is in her reach she becomes a happier more open-hearted person.

This story has many fanciful moments alongside real life emotions that fully immersed me in its outcome. The battle between good and evil is an exciting one where no one is safe in the heart-pounding journey to its HEA. It's a battle that invades both the human and otherworldly worlds in a mystery that keeps you guessing. The romance is subtle but satisfying with a conclusion that is immensely satisfying and I applaud Ms. Stone for her creative storytelling and hope she revisits this world soon.


Wonder Guy
I'll state this right up front. I loved Wonder Guy. This is a charming story with likable, real people interspersed among characters that aren't, well, precisely real. Think adorable fairy godmothers and nasty, shape shifting creatures from another world.
Bookish grad student, Greg Roberts, is a wonderful, caring guy but overlooked and unappreciated by the girl of his dreams, his next door neighbor, Gloria. Desperate to impress her, he agrees to take on extraordinary powers. In doing so, he manages to catch her eye and do some good for the citizens of his home town, Minneapolis. But he really wants to be noticed and loved for who he is and not some masked superhero.
Wonder Guy is whimsical, humorous, lyrical and beautifully written. Ms. Stone does a great job with balance as the story is light and dark, good and evil and most of all, very touching. Check it out. You won't be disappointed.


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