Amazon Triad Publishing Group Category:  Crime Publisher: Triad Pubishing Group ISBN-10:  TangledMinds Type: Fiction Pages: 316 Copyright: Jan 2008 A roller coaster ride of wrong decisions which create consequences that effect lives for generations Brinna Van Pelt is a seventeen year old unwed mother. She has been an A Student,a popular kid in school until she winds up with a baby. Her unthought out decisions and the reactions and the consequences which follow one bad decision after the other affects her child and those around her. Her parents, her son Josh and her friends all fall like a house of cards because of those bad decisions based on a knee jerk reaction Josh finds himself caught in a web or murder and robbery because of the chain of events.        Excerpt As the prison door quietly close behind him with a soft whoosh, Josh thought to himself that he had finally come full circle. He was in the very same place his father had been all those many years ago and he knew he was going to be here for a very long time. He knew he had not listened when he was told that he had control of his life, even if he had a disability. He had always blamed others for his actions. He had always complained that he never got a break in life. He used the excuse that everyone was against him and everything that happened to him was someone else’s fault. These thoughts ran thru his mind as he surveyed his new surroundings. Even now he tried to blame his partners for being in this prison cell. He tried to say that they were the ones who screwed up and caused him to be convicted. Josh could not find it in him to place the blame where it really belonged. It belonged with him. This was now his home. As Josh looked around he saw the remains of others who had been here before him He saw the graffiti of lewd drawings and comments about women they had known or wanted to know. He saw the iron bunk-bed attached to the wall with the paper thin mattress, the single flat pillow, the single sheet, and the prison gray issued blanket. He saw the windowless 6x9 space that held no privacy. The toilet was the focal point of the cell, like an obscene piece of art work. It sat in the middle of the far wall so when he had to relieve himself he was in full view of the guards and other inmates. The sink was a stainless steel sink with no personality. There was a small desk attached to the wall with a chair slid under it opposite the bed. As Josh surveyed his new surroundings, he began the journey again in his mind. It was journey of how he wound up in this place and why. Josh had been moved to his new home away from home in the middle of the night. He had been sleeping in the county jail awaiting transport when the guards had rudely awakened him and told him he was traveling. Josh knew it was going to happen he just did not know when. This had always been a part of his life. He never knew when he would be awakened in the middle of the night as a child to be placed in a car and moved to a new environment. First it was with his teenage mother as she moved from place to place always one step ahead of the law and family and children services. Then it was with his mother and his real dad after he was released from yet another stint in prison for one crime or another. Josh never remembered being in a place for more than a few months and most of the time it was a place shared with people his parents knew. He never lived one place long enough to make the right kind of friends or stay in school long enough to get a decent education. As Josh took a trip down memory lane, he saw the images of his past; present and future begin to blend in one tangled mass of prison gray nothingness. As his visions of his mother and dad lost focus, his vision of the prison gray walls came back into view. Josh knew he had fulfilled the prophecy of his birth: he was in prison for the next 10 years. His crime was one of stupidity mixed with the lack of not being able to say no. He had been part of a loose gang of misfits whose idea of a good time on a Saturday night was to break into the disabled man’s house. He was the uncle of one of Josh’s friends who Josh had met while living in Alabama. The idea was to just scare him and steal his money and anything else of value. However, that idea took on a life of its own when the man tried to fight back. Now Josh was here and his friends were someplace else. Josh was serving time for being an accomplice to robbery and murder, all because he did not have the right stuff to say no and to protect the innocent. So, now at what should have been the beginning of his journey as a productive member of society, Josh at 17 years old was now a convicted felon and a non-productive member of society. He had lost his identity. He became a number and a statistic. Joshua Ruben VanPelt ID # K-13798, inmate at Hardwick Prison in Hardwick, Ga.

Tangled Minds by Karen Patron
Truly captivating. A gripping story of a family torn apart for generations. Such wasted lives. All because one young girl could not accept blame. Every mother and daughter should read this. This could truly happen to any family. One of the best books I've ever read.

By TM Mason Author of War of Storms, Souls of Chaos
A sickly twisted vicious cycle,... one reflective of true life,... in too many ways to list within this review. A fast paced,... swerving ride through generations,... like and out of control vehicle, in a California Farmer’s Market.

Yvonne Mason, reaches into the depths of humanity to pull forward several characters of inter-twining evils among Mankind. Looking at how one bad choice can create a chain reaction,... worthy of displacing Enrico Fermi’s, Nuclear Chain Reaction,... as the most powerful set of cause and consequence within the realm of Man.

At once heart-wrenching and educational,... while sustaining an entertaining look into the destruction of so many lives,... within the consequences of one hastily made, un-thoughtful,... impulsive choice. Showing the exponential explosion of devastations, the combination of bad decisions, and lack of individual responsibility and integrity, can lead to.



By Rozetta Mowery, Author of Tragedy in Tin Can Holler
"Tangled Minds is a fascinating, and eye opening story. It makes you realize that this could be your family. The author tells the story in great and vivid detail, which makes you go through all of the emotions that the characters are feeling. You feel for the characters, and feel your heart screaming out to help them, and to help them see the light of their actions. There are so many great lessons to be learned in this story, from teenage pregnancy, poverty, and both the good and bad sides of society. Everyone can take a small lesson from this book. It is a real page turner!"