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The Lizard Queen Book One: This Shrinking World
by H. L. Cherryholmes   
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The Lizard Queen

Category:  Fantasy
Publisher: CreateSpace

ISBN-10:  1500727849

Type: Fiction

Pages: 290

Copyright: 
October 30, 2014
ISBN-13: 9781500727840

Price: $2.99 (eBook)


300 years ago, in a nameless world, a prophecy passed unfulfilled. A secret society that formed to prevent its occurrence believed it was their doing, while the secret society created to ensure that the prophecy came to pass wasn't certain it had been stopped at all. Eventually, along with the mythology of time prior to the great Lizard Queen’s expansion of this world, the prophecy of Lacáruna fell into legend.

 300 years ago, in a nameless world, a prophecy passed unfulfilled. A secret society that formed to prevent its occurrence believed it was their doing, while the secret society created to ensure that the prophecy came to pass wasn't certain it had been stopped at all. Eventually, along with the mythology of time prior to the great Lizard Queen’s expansion of this world, the prophecy of Lacáruna fell into legend. Split among three nations, nine ancient books hold the key to this world's creation but no one has the ability to read them. And many have come to believe the world is shrinking. The indications are there—nations' leaders falling ill, swamps drying, militaries gathering—that is, if those signs are being interpreted correctly. No one knows because the prophesied Lacáruna, a female from another realm and the only being who can read the Lizard Queen's language, never arrived. What they don't realize is that Amy Darlidale is just a tad late. Taking a break from a stressful workweek, Amy, recently divorced CEO, drives out to her desert getaway. While on a morning jog she crosses paths with an orange lizard and, on a whim, chases it into a field. Suddenly, she finds herself under a starless sky confronted by oddly marked and strangely colored people who claim she's there to rescue the world from evil’s grasp and expand it once again. But not everyone wants that to happen so there's a price on her head. This is far from the relaxing weekend Amy had intended.



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Good Story
really enjoyed this story, particularly the way the parallel world is revealed, slowly and and through Amy's eyes. No info dumps here. I also liked the process of figuring out just how the world is connected to ours, and how its people came to be, the origin story. I'm still not exactly sure, but I have plenty of theories. I'm curious to find out which of them, if any, are correct in the later books. There's also a hint of romance, but just a hint. Nothing racy.

It was also refreshing to find a fantasy world where the people speak variations of Spanish mixed with English, rather than some fictional language that's nearly impossible to pronounce. That the setting is likely parallel to Southern California is supremely interesting to me. Thin boundaries, and all that. It made me glad that I've been brushing up on my Spanish.

On the other hand, the story gets a little caught up in the tedium at times: grooming, traveling, changing clothes, eating. Still, each of these things reveal a little about the people, the history or the setting, it's just not quite as action packed as some might like it to be. I also found the dialog between Amy and her earliest companions a little off at first. I didn't care for how Amy reacted to her rescuers, particularly when they were trying to sneak her away to safety. Finally, it's only fair to say that this is one hundred percent meant to be read as a series. It ends with much to be resolved and many questions yet to be answered. Not exactly a cliffhanger, more of an intermission.

Overall, I liked this book. It might be a good bet for those who enjoy fantasy that doesn't reveal a whole lot up front, particularly for those who like trying to figure things out from clues and context. I think people who like stories that feature alternate realities and parallel worlds would also dig this.

I received a review copy of this book in exchange for an honest, non-reciprocal review on the Pure Textuality blog.


Setup, setup, setup
The best part of This Shrinking World is the world-building. It's just great. It's wonderful to encounter high fantasy that's not just another medieval England Tolkien clone, and there are tantalizing hints dropped throughout of a deeper mystery going on. The only downside is that this is nearly all setup. If this were a standalone, I might be mad, but as the keystone to a 9 book series? I'm definitely coming back for the rest.


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