This Debut Novel by David Pyle is a new
Supernatural Thriller centered in historical Natchez, Mississippi.
The main character James Earl Williams has inherited something unusual that he doesn't want to receive. With the inheritance he has also picked up a tormenting enemy, invading every facet of his daily life and nightly dreams.
Raised in New Jersey, James has never imagined that anything supernatural exists outside of books or movies, but that's all about to change.
Love is supposed to bring happiness and hope, a bright perspective of future events. Put both of these elements into a pot, stir in a little dark Voodoo with a dash of passion, and the murky stew will turn deadly.
Supernatural powers are calling in their markers within the historic town of Natchez, Mississippi. James Earl Williams, unwillingly anointed heir and keeper to decades of family secrets, is being meticulously stalked by a malignant force targeting his family. Only seventeen years old and days after graduating from high school, yet he will have to make irrevocable decisions any battle-hardened soldier would fear. Can he leave his beautiful Jolie behind for the safety of his family?
Tormented by the past and present, love and hope will entice him ino a dark place where dreams and premonitions mirror reality. Yet this new reality will be a tiny glimpse into the hell inside us all.
Excerpt
Prologue
Monday, June 6, 1977
When I was very young, I believed that all women could read minds. At least all the women in my family and their friends could. At some mysterious age, this gift was passed on and all of the female gender kept this well guarded secret from the male
population at large. They seemed to know just what I was doing or thinking at any moment and of course, I would get into some kind of trouble for whatever I was planning… or had already done. So, the dilemma was how to keep my thoughts mundane while in the presence of any female.
Oh well, I know that’s not happening.
Somewhere along the timeline of my 17 years, I dismissed this notion, along with the Tooth Fairy and the Easter Bunny. However, incidents over the last few days have driven me backwards into a reevaluation of my logic and beliefs. My childish beliefs about the boogey man, hidey behinds, ghosts, and the unknown are all subject to scrutiny.
Right now…, this second, the small hairs standing up on the back of my neck are governing my belief system.
So, why am I standing in the dark, outside, in my boxers and t-shirt, listening to something that I thought I heard? Something that I thought I glimpsed out of the corner of my eye?
Silence escapes me. All I hear is the beat of my heart pounding in my ears and every breath I take sounds like a cow in labor.
I’ve heard that it’s adrenaline…, I think its fear.
Nevertheless, I’m beginning to see things that aren’t there, out on the edge…
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Chapter 1
The gentle currents of the Mississippi night air pushed the faint scent of locust blossoms through the sheltered back yard. The sound of a lone cricket, scratching its legs, matched the ebb and flow of the leaves in the huge cottonwood near the tool shed. Behind the house, one silent witness stood frozen, back sticking against its clapboard siding, listening intently.
A scratchy click, click, clicking sound coming from nowhere in
particular, that didn’t match anything in a library of memories, had become a nightly irritation.
Last week, James Earl Williams made his annual flight from New
Jersey to visit his maternal grandparents. This had been uneventful enough, but this year normal ended somewhere over the Mason-Dixon Line. Since his arrival in Deep South Mississippi, a nightly sound, somewhere between the back porch and his bedroom, had broken that subtle routine of the body and mind. At 3 a.m., when most people enjoy their deepest sleep, James was busy with a begrudged nightly inspection.
Without the aid of the familiar glow of the Jersey skyline, James had only a mix of glow and shadows from the single streetlight far in front of his grandparents’ home. The dark seemed ridiculous.
He shook the flashlight once more and the dim yellow light reappeared. It was more of an irritant than aid.
James stood still, thoughts churning in a desperate attempt to prove his theory that this was something common in nature. He had never been the type that needed a night light or ran whining into his parents bedroom from a nightmare or some monster under the bed. Spooks and monsters were reserved for cheap horror movies and novels and of course, what he dispensed to his younger brother Sam. It was a wonder that Sam could sleep at night after fifteen years of sibling torment.
Maybe this was just karma making its circle.
The sound disappeared just as quickly as it started with the same nightly shuffling sound and then dead silence. Even the lone cricket and air movement died away as if on queue. Beyond the beat of his heart, James heard the solitary sound of distant thunder with its gentle rumblings and flashes of orange heat lightning along the horizon. His damp back sticking to the outside wall and fingers digging into the clapboard siding like a rock climber had produced its regular migraine.
With a slow exhale, he relaxed.
Maybe this was just an exaggeration of the mind and none of this was real. Reality would be the raucous alarm clock that would wake him in a couple of hours. What could have changed since his last summer in Natchez, Mississippi?
Back inside, back to bed, back to the steady drone of the ceiling fan and pray for sleep.
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Journal—Thursday, June 9, ’77
Ever since I got here to Gramma and Grampa’s, I’ve spent my best sleep time of the morning, investigating inside and outside, with my ear against the wall. There’s this ticking noise and it’s driving me crazy. I know it’s just a bug, but I want it gone.
If I had a stethoscope, I would use it, find it, kill it.
They do have a cat . Gramma’s monster Siamese, “Tommy,” takes care of mice,
with his creepy ability to zero in and make a meal of anything that moves, especially
moths and crickets. But the last few days he’s been out being a tomcat.
Both my grandparents have dismissed the ticking as “house settling.”
You know these old houses settle for years—Gramma Ames told me.
They just wear out like the bones in us old folks and start creaking. I like the way
she puts things in perspective.
I took that as an answer the first few nights, but now…
Oh God, I don’t want to admit it here, in case someone reads this.
I’ve started seeing things…faces, glaring at me.
In the daytime…I can’t tell anyone.
So…, it’s like I’m daydreaming about something, anything…and out of the corner
of my eye, in a pattern in the floral wallpaper or in the furniture arrangement, or even
a bush or tree outside, there’s a face staring at me.
Now before I’m labeled completely crazy, or over imaginative, the faces don’t go
away when I look their direction.
They aren’t happy faces either.
Some sad, some angry, or just plain pissed off, but never happy.
I asked my Gramma Ames if she saw one last Friday morning. She just stared as
I went over to the collage of vases and flowers on her curio trying frantically to help her
see, until I noticed the desperation of boredom come into her eyes.
I never mentioned it to her again for fear that she would think her grandson was
kooky.
Was I? Am I?
James Earl Williams, average white boy, ready for the loony bin, at age 17. Is it
the trauma of moving halfway across the country from my usual Jersey City life, to
Mississippi where there are only three local channels on TV? These people don’t even
have cable. Most just have a bunch of twisted rusty metal poles strapped upside their
houses with arrow shaped antennas dangling from the top.
I’m going stir crazy, already.
I like visiting my grandparents, but since it became a forced visit, part of my
probation, it took away all the usual feelings I normally get from being around them.
But this is my last summer to be under that thumb and I’ll be free!
Really free.
It’s hard to believe that five years have passed since I was sentenced to stay here
during my summers, away from my parents and brother, but more importantly away
from the “bad influences” of the neighborhood.
I don’t know where I’ll be going, but I’ll definitely be gone.
Or will I? I can’t make up my mind. I’m really starting to like the slower pace and
the people here.
At least work at Earl’s Garage with my Grampa keeps my mind off my troubles.
Now if I can just figure out what’s making that ticking racket.
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Between Life and Death is a trip through the supernatural looking glass, with a sip of southern comfort. [http://www.reviewscout.com/1608362442]
Set in the year 1977, just prior to the cell phone, computer, and Ipod generation, this story gives you a feel of what it was like back when life events were more thought out and surreal.
The main character, seventeen-year-old James Earl Williams, has had more than his share of difficulties and has almost smoothed out those wrinkles prior to visiting his grandparents in Mississippi.
His family offers him a genuine feeling of support and close-knit emotional connection, but the reluctance of youth prevents him from exposing the building terror that is chewing into his mind.
Just when events begin to get their strangest, he is thrust into the confusing arms of his first feelings of love with Jolie. Her persona is an irresistible young Cajun girl with a charming Aunt as her support.
Underlying currents from the past begin to surface through James’ dreams and by now the seat to the story’s roller-coaster will have locked you into its grip.
Authentic characters pull you along smoothly into the story line and when you think you know what to expect, will take you completely by surprise. Spiritual Hoodoo and superstitions abound within the realm of the Mississippi River locations.
Raised in the south, I could almost see each character, feel the sticky humidity, and cringe to their reactions. Their dealings with spiritual torments, which though subtle, tend to make them just a little too realistic at times.
The imaginative plot offers completely unexpected twists and turns into the concept of spirit activity as well as a look at the neighbor next door.
This novel brought back memories of the inner struggles of youth, with its needs and desires as well as the preconceived illusions of finding adulthood.
Historical references to the Mississippi delta are mostly convincing and the vivid descriptions easily take you into the creepy world of what might be making that sound in your closet or behind the door.
Being a late night reader further exploited my feeling of being observed by something over the shoulder, which actually enhanced the enjoyment of this page-turner.
The imagination of the author will owe us at least one continuation into the lives of the main characters James and his sweetheart Jolie.
A fresh twist of Thriller fiction.
Highly Recommended for the Horror Fiction Fan.
Between Life and Death by David Pyle Reviewed by Sharon Cupp Pennington, author of Hoodoo Money
David Pyle’s southern roots and love of Mississippi shine in his debut novel, Between Life and Death (Publish America, 2009, ISBN 1-60836-244-2). As a rule, horror novels are not for the faint of heart, and Pyle doesn’t disappoint with his rich characterizations, colloquial speak, and imaginative storytelling.
Between Life and Death-
opens with Pyle’s protagonist, James Earl Williams, on an annual pilgrimage to his maternal grandparents’ home in Natchez, Mississippi. James has journeyed south from New Jersey many times in the past and spent satisfying hours at work in his grandfather’s garage repairing cars for local residents and restoring his treasured ‘67 Mustang. But this will prove a summer of upheaval for the seventeen-year-old in which he finds himself embroiled in grave-robbing, murder, kidnapping, and a shocking digression into the sinister sway of backwoods voodoo. James’ quandary begins with a mysterious clicking sound emanating from inside the walls of his grandparents’ house. The nocturnal nuisance spurs bouts of insomnia, nightmares of suffocation in oily seas, and midnight investigating only to find no source for the noise. It isn’t until his Aunt Martiel reveals a family history of paranormal sight that young James opens his mind and will to the treachery that lies ahead. All he holds dear, his newfound love for sweet Jolie, and his faith are questioned as James faces the unspeakable conjured by Miss Lyda Brown, a merciless bokor, a voodoo sorceress capable of capturing souls and raising the undead.
How does a teenager wage war against a being so ancient and evil as Lyda Brown and her minions, Toad and Billy? What dormant skills must James hone to emerge victorious and save his family? What long-hidden secret will he discover?
All novels possess strengths and weaknesses. The strengths of Between Life and Death fall in the realm of clever suspense and layers of backbone-tingling horror. This novel’s primary weakness, unfortunately, stems from a lack of quality editing — and a publisher who, in my humble opinion, seems satisfied that the disclaimer “Publish America has allowed this work to remain exactly as the author intended, verbatim, without editorial input” releases them from the guarantee that a novel goes to readers at its utmost best. What a shame.
I base my estimate of a novel’s worth on whether it holds my interest, if I leave a night’s read and find myself still speculating about what might happen. If I’m drawn to the characters. Between Life and Death accomplished all of this.
David Pyle comes from an extended career in manufacturing and technology. He lives in North Texas with his son and daughter, and is presently working on a sequel. Between Life and Death is available through PublishAmerica, Amazon and other fine booksellers.
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Reviews for "Between Life and Death (First Edition Out-of-Print)"
This first edition of Between Life and Death, which is now out of print, was an interesting launch into the world of publishing. The publisher, now defunct, published this version completely raw and unedited! My first raw manuscript was birthed with all of its flaws and idiosyncrasies intact. I was in shock and quickly learned that my beloved first born novel-child would remain this way for the entire seven years of my publishing contract.
I have no regrets. This experience was an invaluable learning experience as an uninitiated author!
Now, on to the story...
Even this unvetted edition of Between Life and Death received several terrific pre and post release reviews, some of which are still lurking around on the internet.
As posted above, this version no longer exists except for a few copies in my personal library, but you will love the Second Edition, which has been fully edited and revised and quickly became Book One of Three in the Between Life and Death Trilogy.
Thank you for reading and I appreciate any feedback.
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