
Kindle Edition
Amazon
Category:
Fantasy
Publisher: Independently published
ISBN-10: 1521766657
Type: Fiction
Pages: 519
Copyright: July 5, 2017
ISBN-13: 9781521766651
Price: $2.99 (eBook)
Taerak's Void
(Book One of Fantastica)
A new series by multiple award winning author, M. R. Mathias
After finding a strange medallion and some maps with markings that no one in his village can understand, Braxton Bray decides to take it all to the Hall of Scholars in the kingdom's capital. But greed is everywhere. Braxton and a tough young female caravan guard named Nixy are forced to run for their lives, for someone else wants what Braxton found and is willing to go to great lengths to take it from him.
With a hefty, kingdom wide, bounty on their heads, not even the great wizards of the Sorcerious can help them. Left with nothing but each other, Braxton and Nixy have no choice but to get on a ship and go on an adventure that will take them places they would have otherwise never imagined. Elves, dwarves, giant gothicans, and trolls, treacherous forests on distant shores, love, death, terror, and magic all await anyone brave enough to go along.
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The book was overall entertaining but the story sounded a lot like the Tolkien series and I was a bit disturbed by that. While the writing was good that originality factor hurt it.
The characters were well described and the interaction between male and female was handled well enough that I would not have an issue with rating it PG-13 audience.
I was impressed with the scope of thought the writer put into developing the realm in which the story takes place. It was fleshed out well but more importantly, I had no problem seeing it in my mind and even the sense of scale of the vast area was well considered and described.
The cities and communities for the most part, were adequately filled in although some were left thin and probably more importantly, they weren’t overly dwelled upon but developed enough to give me an understanding of the areas and events taking place. I was however, disappointed that there were some areas where key events of the story took place and yet they had no detail at all, i.e. a shipping port with only two people at the dock?
I personally thought the opening was too rushed. Things that needed to be accomplished in the natural progress of the opening action scenes were grossly omitted and the summation was sudden and in-explicably in favor of the protagonist. It left me feeling a bit confused.
While I’m not a “magic” fan, preferring factual and or theoretical physics to “it just happened that way”, I did like the way the magic was added in small portions, sometimes effective and sometimes not. The idea that all magic is effective, is tiring to me. Like a gun, misfires and or plain misses should be factored in and the events where magic was used here, reflected that.
Although I was disappointed in the way the protagonist healed afterwards, I was also impressed that the protagonist was not written in as indestructible and grossly omitted in the collateral damage areas. There were injuries he suffered in battle and the damage, effects and resulting suffering of the damage afterwards, made him more believable to me.
I thought the villain, introduced in the end of the book was also rushed and somewhat confusing. There was no real introduction or progression of development as to why and how he became the antagonist and explanations helping to flesh him out within the story, occurred only in the end of the book and were thin.
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Overall, I would award this story with a rating of 3 stars out of 5 because although I felt the writer’s style is deserving of a 4, the originality of the story draws it backward.
(IMO)