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If my Dad knew

by Lalita Vasu — Read all 1 poems by Lalita Vasu

The author bemoans the passing of her father, who did not know she wrote!

Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Wiping the tears off my eyes, I thought,
In so many of my years in the world,
My dad did not know I write stories. 
It never occurred to me to tell him,
Or show him my stories;
But then I thought,
What would be different if my dad knew?

That a day would come,
When he would not be by my side,
I’ll miss him so much,
It had never even crossed my mind.
Only now do I realize,
The gentleman I called Dad,
Meant just so much to me.

But I am sure, if my dad knew I write stories,
He would be proud of me and tell his friends,
“That’s my daughter!”
Who is also an author;
Or would he just smile and show
Subtly that he loved me ever so more,
Never openly revealing emotions
Just a silent look, a small pat, or just a reassuring smile?



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Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 23, 2024
I truly can relate to your feelings and your expression of them in this poem. My Dad was not none to show emotions and he died young. Little did he know that I enjoyed writing and that the first book I was to write, Red Soil, would be of him and his life. He did not know I wrote poetry either for in my error and in my younger years...men who wrote poetry were frowned upon. Still, like you I would like to think that he and my mother are proud of me as well.
Fee

Reviewed by Lorna Knox
Reviewed on October 28, 2022
Lovely Poem!

Reviewed on June 16, 2022
Hello Lalita,

I hope I got that right. I understand. I miss my dad every day too. My dad never knew I wrote either, but I really didn't start until after he died. I'm sure your dad is looking down at you, saying, "that's my girl". Nice sentimental piece.

Mary

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on March 20, 2021
Your Dad must be very proud of you.

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on August 25, 2019
Dad are our heroes from birth, and yes think he would be so proud of you, I am sure from where he is, he knows , Thank you for sharing, your heart Lalita, xo

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 25, 2016
Meaningful and heartwarming, Lalita. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 23, 2013
I am so sorry for your loss. Writing helps to heal ones soul. I'm sure your dad is very proud of you!...You are in my prayers....M

Reviewed on January 29, 2012
Lalita,
We send our condolences, and encourage you to write more.
...Michael

Reviewed by Donna Chandler
Reviewed on January 26, 2012
Try to not focus on regrets. Instead focus on the good times and the happy days. I'm sure your dad was proud of you for all that you were to him. Remember him with love and joy.

Donna

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
be happy to have know that reassuring smile ... when i told my father i wrote poetry (was 14 at the time) he got upset, thought i was becoming a homosexual ...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
I can tell from your description that your father would have welcomed your writing.

My father wanted me to do many things and I did. However, he knew that I wrote, but never read what I wrote. Finally, in the last two years of his life, my mother made him read my novels (no threats, just gentle nudging). He never said anything about my books, but I was glad he got to read them.

No need to feel sorry. Life is full of missed opportunities. We just have to move on and take advantage of the next opportunity–your mother?

Ron


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