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When I Fell for You
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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I wrote this a while back...thinking of what I'd missed and wanting to be whole.


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I sat here reading ...nothing
Passing time til sleep
I heard yet a whisper
It came from somewhere deep
I don't recall the reason
I began my search for you
I only know I did it
And how my heartbeat grew
Each minute that was closer
I felt you beckon 'Here!'
I turned an ear to the beat
Then suddenly you're there
I saw the description
Though faint and mystery
I felt again a pang just then
As I wandered near
There you were smiling
Confident and grand
I knew I had to answer
Reach our for your hand
You answered in a moment
Thats all it took from you
You were out there waiting
And I was waiting too
Your answer was a tingle
The second was a pop
The third letter I knew then
This would never stop
Your humming plays within me
Your words help to embrace
The love I have here waiting
Patience with all grace
Right here in this woman
A sourthern one and all
I am a porcelain witness
That love has come to call
Then you.. you were magic
How did you hear my plea
I was a hollow heart before
Suddenly now... I'm free
Come to me in your whisper
Waken me with your kiss
Dance across this threshold
This is what I miss
I want to hold your shoulders
Embrace your smile so fresh
Moondance on your whispers
Flesh to flesh to flesh
Come upon a whisper...
Drop from out the blue
Hold me for this moment
While I'm falling into you.

copyright 2004

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 Reviews of "When I Fell for You"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
A wondeful, passionate ode to love. The scene reminds me of West Virginia before strip mines.

Reviewed by Anthony Hall
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
"You were out there waiting
And I was waiting too"

Susan, emotions so lovingly and clearly expressed!

"I want to hold your shoulders
Embrace your smile so fresh
Moondance on your whispers
Flesh to flesh to flesh"

Love so excellently told!

Anthony


Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
Susan this is
Amazing what wonderful
poetic words
excellent write

William

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
Awesome poetry Susan!!

Wow!!

Masterpiece M'Lady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
My higest compliment to you
WISH I WROTE IT.......... wow...pax A

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
Susan,
Excellent write love the ending. Many wonderful lines.


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