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Metal to Stone
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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"By contrast…Lo!
The Flint to Steel
By spark to flame
Their thoughts reveal
That He the Metal
She the Stone
Had cherished secretly
Alone."

In awed respect
Flickered a flame
In thoughts for capture
None to blame
For in their spirit’s
Restless flight
Their flame grew on
Brighter…Bright

The nights were tasted
Theirs to own
As daylight fades
It’s shadowed form
They stole another
Blissful eve
Because they chose
To believe.

As metal drapes
Itself to stone
In ecstasy
They’re not alone
For lovers / friends
Eternal plight
Is live for days
To love for nights.

With purloined rhythm
Hearts beat close
They loved till dawn
As sun arose
Flint to Steel
Their Metal honed
Content once more…for days alone. 

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 Reviews of "Metal to Stone"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 25, 2006
Great offering...not sure if I remember this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Splendid metaphor and brilliant word usage make this a coupling of magical mystical beauty!Lovely work Susan! Thanks for the repost!

Eileen

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
The alchemy of Metal to Stone cements these words in passion's grate, sealing inside nights of secret ecstasy, the lovers satisfied with those moments.

Sage

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
what a close proximaty but yet extreme difference...metal or stone...man or woman
intersting ideas to dwell on my friendly lady

felix

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
This is fantastic
very intense and symbolic........
the human spirit is magnificant :)

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Dear Susan
Thank you this love write!
"..Hearts beat close
They loved till dawn
As sun arose.."
Beautiful!
"Content once more…for days alone."
Perfect ending!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Susan,

Beautiful; I have enjoyed watching your poetry blossom into higher and higher rhelms. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
A very fine spiritual,and metaphorical write, Susan
You have perfected the art of conveying emotion and passion
in symbolic form and dress
Very compelling picture cements the theme
Peter

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Interesting write :-)


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