Most men yearn to feel a woman's power, to try to possess it, to take advantage of it, then in their selfishness, wish that she would relinquish it. A good man learns to cherish it, to respect it, to nurture it and to share it for he knows it will help him grow as well. I feel a very deep message here. profound writing.
I kept seeing an artist flinging small glassfuls of different colors at a canvas. Afterwards the canvas somehow spoke several languages fluently and then moved upon the throngs with a rare eloquence.
Go figure ...
This was intriguing ... it is like a vision that speaks of levels of awareness and communiction that transcend the corporeal.
lucious, delightful passion in tasty verse...whew. Who needs the heat wave when I can read poetry like this? Scorching!! LOL But excellently penned. Well done, Susan!
Love Tinka
Pierre.
I kept seeing an artist flinging small glassfuls of different colors at a canvas. Afterwards the canvas somehow spoke several languages fluently and then moved upon the throngs with a rare eloquence.
Go figure ...
This was intriguing ... it is like a vision that speaks of levels of awareness and communiction that transcend the corporeal.
Very good construct dear Susan!
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Ron
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
You light up the Den today with this searing offering..
As if it wasn't sizzling enough outside !
A Golden Oldie
Peter
And, just WHAT is an, "oldie?"
Let's not go there! Your work keeps me young enough ! ! !
- Bill
he bows his head to worship thee
to taste to, savour ambrosia sweet
his table her on satin sheet
Great write Susan and sorry I just had to add the above in the spirit of the moment as my passion built.
Hugs,
Fee