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The Negatives of Pride
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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The ego is like a thin patch of cloud that prevents the sun being seen. If, by the guru's grace, it disperses, then one can see God.

-Ramakrishna


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Pride can put out a fire
Suture shut a heart
Turn a blindside to love
End it all before it starts

Pride can disrupt a family
Start a war
Close all doors
Leave infinite scars

Pride is superb
When worn with grace
Alas tired and ugly
When dressed out-of-place

Worn on sleeves
Relished with smiles
But mean as Hell
When fading "in style"

Pride runs the gamut of selfishness
Making the points that hurt
Miscalculated words_just once
Can become a vicious flirt

Grace and pride
Worn with a smile
Can stretch the oceans
Conquer the miles

But pain and tears
Yes! Disbelief
Can come to those
That pride decieves.

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 Reviews of "The Negatives of Pride"
Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on September 24, 2006
As long as I can remember I have believed pride to be one of the downfalls of mankind,yet we all seem to feel it at some point in our lives. I prefer feeling joy for others and celebrating their accomplishments with them over taking pride in them for what they achieve. You have written this so well. Pierre.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
Quite a prideful lesson. I'll go tell the lions.

Ron

Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
oh, as others here have said, such wisdom, to see both sides of this human tendency... yes, necessary to make one believe in onself, but when the reains are broken, devastating results, this is quite an insightful, though provoking piece, dear Susan and it so captures the 'two sides' of Pride...the need for just enough and again, well, what it can wreak when it grows beyond ...bravo, Susan for quite a poem!
you are quite amazing...
Hugs!
michele

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
Pride can be a bitch for sure!!

love Tinka


Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
It is a pity that the English language is so deficient in giving out meanings. For there are many different "pride" as there is "love". One can be proud of one's achievements but if it turns to arrogance, then pride becomes insupportable. And I think that is what you mean. Great poem, I'm proud to be tracking you :-) Victor

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
Pride to an extent is a necessity, if no pride we have low esteem, it is when pride is excessive to the point of blocking ones view that problems arise. Well done Susan, anohter keeper.

Fee

Reviewed on September 23, 2006
Pride does cause problems; I am learning that myself. Good write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed on September 23, 2006
Excellent, and I concur with F.William, Susan; I'm proud of your poetry. You inspire me. Well written, with a thought provoking message.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
Well said, Susan!
But, the pride I have in my friend's poetry is totally acceptable.
This is a message of love, for it is so hard to love one who has
put pride out there on the chest for all to despise.
- Bill

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
No one can set themselves up as judges as to where eternity will be spent but let those that have eyes, see and those that have ears, hear, what has been proclaimed by God.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
A wisdom message in this excellent poem Susan!...ET

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
(((((( Precious Susan ))))))) you have ancient sage wisdom eternaly. This POWERFUL write was despretly called and needed in these last day..I pray others will listen!!!!I missed you and happy to see you posting..Have a beautiful day, angel...

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
Pride - I believe - is the foundation on which all other human indiscretion and ugliness is built. There is little that is worse than an arrogant, prideful, haughty, human being.

Yes, pride is a deciever, and often those who dance to its cacophony end up as your image portrays.

Wisely and aptly put ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
very wise thoughts, Susan. thank you. I enjoyed this.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
A most interesting and sage piece, Susan.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
You know what I have found out over the years? An over-prideful person is beset with inferiorty complexes. Excellent poetry.


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