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Amour Immortal
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Patient at her easel
Daubing midnight into shades
Holding to a memory
Before the shape of him fades
Collecting magic from her palette
Stroking acytelene passion's flow
Steeped in eternity
With a sabled sparkled afterglow
She hums a song of rhythm
Perpetuated in love's moving tune
Quietly she acqueices
Keeping time beneath a liquid moon
Slowly she sways from loving
A dance with spirit's creature, strong
Creating bliss for this lifetime
Amour immortal
Just where her love belongs.

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 Reviews of "Amour Immortal"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 10, 2006
This one really touches me--rich, and full of color. Unfortunately, the palette pictured is dry.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 10, 2006
To be in love and focused on a God given vision is sheer delight Belle. Beautifully written. Happy Holidays to you dear friend.

Love and Peace ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on December 10, 2006
Your imagery is wonderful here, Susan, transforming the poem into a painting within itself. Extraordinary -- I do so enjoy your writing. It's always a pleasure to read.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 10, 2006
Amour Immortal - Marvelous!

Reviewed by Steve Joos
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
You paint a rich picture with words. Nice work.

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
Amour Immortal sets my heart to wonder. Pierre.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
Vintage SKdeV
Absolutely picture perfect
DWB

Reviewed on December 9, 2006
Really enjoyed the well thought lines in this one

Reviewed by Jimmy Mills
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
Wow Susan! What a masterpiece here. A great picture of everlasting love. Thanks for this. Jim

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
Breathtaking write that bounces the images between reality and art to create a masterpiece.

Fee

Reviewed on December 9, 2006
It's amazing how far we can be drawn into the deeper recesses of the canvas that stand deceptively lifeless on the easel. In reality - at least for the conceptual mind of the artist - the canvas, in the form of the subject created, possess an alluring quality that sucks you in.
I love the imagery you employ which for me is in harmony with how my mind engters into the embelishing strokes of the sienna dipped sable.

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
I love how you mixed the person with the painting.
Images forever.
Well done
Gods Speed!
Michael

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
Timeless eloquence for a timeless theme, a "song of rhythm" that flows out in ripples of shimmering beauty.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
Love is all, Susan. You express this most effectively in your verses here. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
Lovely vivid picture you have painted !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
I can almost picture her painting and her passion for the one who is on her portrait. Victor

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
Romance has been on your mind of late, and true love is immortal.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on December 9, 2006
Immortal love...a nice display of thought...


enjoyed.....Art Sun...


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