"Fitting together as one right now, Settled us two with the moon" loved every line of this poem, but these last two say it all, Neither my heart nor my body, nor my soul has ever truly fit together or been settled with another. This is so beautiful! Love Pierre.
OOzing passionate seduction in "moonlight dribbles" and "Silhouettes swooning" candor. Oh what a coo your word blends. I can feel the temperature rising to oblivion and the moonlit afterglow. Amazing what happens to a poet under the full moon...tonight no exception.
Love to you Susan.
Taylor
From the opening line invitation to the afterglow of an orgasm in the very last line, this write has a true sensuality that cannot be denied. The images, smells, sights, and night sounds all came bursting through with each line making me want to scream where the heck is the field. This one is sweet dear Susan, sweet as the smell of summer hay and clover.
hugs,
Fee
Falling to a rare sentinel illness and separated from her charges during a retrieval mission Xevera Nanay encounters the biggest threat to her survival but more importantly her autonomy when paramedic Michael Constantine recognizes and imprisons her
Ron
~Butch
and wells as yout lovely piece or art
(Love In the Moonlight)
William
Love & peace
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love Tinka
Love,
CJ
Very beautiful, sensual and passionate piece.
Love to you Susan.
Taylor
hugs,
Fee
Excellent and very passionate !
A very vivid Imagery and flow!!
Love And Peace To You...Morning Star
Love,
ET
breathtaking.
Michael