It's been a very long time carrying this inside
Long years of comfort tinged with confusion is settled
The absolute security of having a full shine is more direct today
Inside ... there is a haven where you dwell
My safe place
Here where we never guess
Where there is no judgement
No one enters and chaos is never allowed
Not where the spirit of this lover and the soul of her heart reigns
Where we always begin to shine and never pale
In here... in this white hot core ...
This haven
We have our dreams... our way
Infinity seems real
There are no doubts nor repenting and regrets
Here we have taller years
We make better use of time
Our thoughts have credence
Being accountable to one another is ...
Most important
Ethics is more than a word
Here we admit to immortality
We live and hold to every morsel that's positive
Time is tasted
Here values are treasured
Our sorrows are outlived
Tender caresses of faith ... shine
In this haven...our safe place.
Susan Kathryn de Vegter
copyright 2007
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Reviews of "Time Is Tasted"
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
I love the idea of a place where we can outlive our sorrows. I like this place Susan! Well done!
~Butch
Many thanks for drawing a map that shows the way.
Now, how do I stay. . . .
Day after day. . . .
DWB
'Tender caresses of faith...shine'
Great line!!
Great title! (again)
Glad we got one (safe place). I tested time once, but I was too late. ;-)
Ron
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
My, my, you continously grab me by the . . . You each and every time tug at my . . . When I read one of your dynamite pieces of work I know that I have been . . . (Fill in the blanks with beautiful woords, because that is how I feel) Love your new bio photo . . .
Enjoyed this much...we do each need a safe haven. Loved the poetic beauty of this write. I recently posted a poem, A Haven...My Space. This write was about my haven, my home...it is easier to have faith, stay prayed up, seek God's face and be encouraged while in our safe haven, however it is also a great place to draw spiritual strength that we must have to survive outside our havens. Enjoyed this, great write my friend.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Well... I am about to sit a spell at Susan K.de Vegter's page! It's been awhile and just not fair!
I love your Safe Haven!
YOu're such a sweet dreamer!
Shhhh... Keep still you can hear the fairies whispering....Sweet little love tokens!
It's been really hard *( I will try harder and knowing it's the New Year matters to me) to get around *(here) I love your heart and mind! Sue... I think I'll park it for awhile!
Want a smile- go to my recent poems.... See what rattles your bones....
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~Butch
Love,
CJ
Now, how do I stay. . . .
Day after day. . . .
DWB
'Tender caresses of faith...shine'
Great line!!
Great title! (again)
Ron
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love Tinka
Beauty from in this safe place. Wonderful capture.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Most enjoyable read
thanks for sharing ...Susan
Peace & Love
William
brillant poetry, Susan ...
enjoyed.....Art Sun...
Well done,
Michael
I love your Safe Haven!
YOu're such a sweet dreamer!
Shhhh... Keep still you can hear the fairies whispering....Sweet little love tokens!
It's been really hard *( I will try harder and knowing it's the New Year matters to me) to get around *(here) I love your heart and mind! Sue... I think I'll park it for awhile!
Want a smile- go to my recent poems.... See what rattles your bones....
WArmest Blessings and HuGs,WArrior Sheeeooxxx