Ease Upon My Flavors (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

Wow Susan, the feeling that comes over the reader, created by your words and lines here, provoke passionate desire and convey the struggle to slow down while the flame of temptation burns hotly. -Lovely and stirring!
~Butch

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on January 21, 2007

Susan, this is bliss and I wish I could write these desires of the heart as well as you do...
Love, Taylor

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 21, 2007

The rumpled bed looks like passion won out!

Ron

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

The passion contained in this poem I have allways longed for, but have never known. Love this, Pierre.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

i like the ebb and flow of passion if this, Susan ...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

Now THAT'S a suggestion I believe I could handle . . . Gotta love it . . .

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

Fabulous write my friend.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

Quite beautifully penned, Susan.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

Your diction hints of classicism here Belle. And the message is eternal. Delightful write from the heart of a gem!

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

Sighhhhhhhhhhhhh...absolutely beautiful, etheral write. Well done, Susan!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

In a fleeting moment. . . .
You've captured eternity.
DWB

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

AS always no one can write such romance as you!!!

Love & Peace, JO

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

This is beautiful, Susan. Soft and flowing with a lovely romantic message. Very nice!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

This one flows so well. Wonderful work, Susan!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

Susan,

Very passionate and well versed.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 19, 2007

Susan, as the Mistress of Desire you have outdone yourself with this simple yet ultra passionate verse of love. The bed cries out to the lovers to return and your words their music sings. Well done my friend of ages.

Fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2007

YAY, make it last for hours. fun fun fun....

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 18, 2007

Steaming on all burners! Amazing capture in short verse!
WTG Sis!;-)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 18, 2007

That picture is flavorful enough ...Susan
But your words, leave at awe
Beautiful poem

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 18, 2007

You capture the feeling well but few men can contol themselves.