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Tell Me?
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Tell me how the grass smells after a summer rain?
Then tell me how the sun streams and eases a muscle pain?
Then speak of all the different songs a mockingbird can bring
Then tell me if you can, in your step, is there a spring?
The leap that comes in a pace just when your true love beckons
The trapeze swing that clings to love, just where is it, you reckon?
You think it's lost in a place where sun is outside waiting ?
Or an office, a cubicle where work is always stretching
Hours upon hours making sense of money
What's the point when life is short, what's the matter honey?
Tell me what you're missing, living life this way
You can't have many treasures if you pay and never play
Take a look at country, a rusting John Deere Tractor
Smell new hay and take a nap, make laziness a factor
Add rosiness to your cheeks and life to all your tears
Work to live, not the opposite, add detail to all your years
Keep it up you'll miss the boat, the meaning of your birth
You can make it stretch more today and double all your worth
Take it easy on your spirit, it too could use some sun
Come on out and play with me, add years to all your fun.
I love you and afterall, funny as it seems
You can't possibly love living when you short change all your dreams


© Susan Kathryn de Vegter

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Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 24, 2007
Thanks for this lovely reminder to live life today. It's funny you mention a rusting John Deere tractor; I also have one in a poem I wrote too.
"Work to live, not the opposite, add detail to all your years"
Well done Susan!
~Butch

Reviewed on January 22, 2007
'You can't possibly love living when you short change all your dreams'

Powerful line that resonates too uncomfortably with past experience.


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Exceptional work with wisdom and beauty of thought! This is a keeper Susan!Kudo's!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Why is it the grass smells better when it's cut and dying? There's something to be said for watching the grass grow.

Beats Emerson.

Ron

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Lines like Beauty and Truth personified sitting together on a hillside delighting in the shapes of clouds glittering in sunlight. A great Sunday afternoon read. Much gratitude,
Aberjhani

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
have to live life to its fullest ... excellent work ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Don't have all the answers..but I know this is well penned!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
An excellent piece ..susan
Enjoyable read

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Well said my friend! A perfect write! love Holly

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
You can't have many treasures if you pay and never play

So very true, Susan - and I love Emerson's quote.

Reviewed by Gilles Marchand
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Very well put from one dreamer to another.
The Fish

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Advice we all could use,especially me.Have fun and take time to smell the roses.Excellent poem,
Loved it,

Michael

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
This is going on my desk. A bloody masterpiece is this..Yay for you...

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
I hear you. Am agreeing with every word. In the "After Holidays" time, some of lus get into a downer, but you empty the chairs and benches very effectivelly!

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
"You can make it stretch more today and double all your worth
Take it easy on your spirit, it too could use some sun
Come on out and play with me, add years to all your fun.
I love you and afterall, funny as it seems
You can't possibly love living when you short change all your dreams"

You are so right, Susan...all we have is today to take advantage of...so here's to times for rosey cheeks and following dreams.I'm ready.
Love,
Taylor





Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
The most important thing in life is living it, aside from work, I allways lose sight of that,Excellent write, Thank you for this. Love Pierre.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Oustanding and motivating piece Susan...

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
We all have our dreams and life sometimes gets better because of them. Victor

Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
Yay!
love you Susan...
simonb

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
Very wise poem, Susan! Life is for living and there has not been one person laying in bed, facing thir own death, who said that they wish that they had spent more time working and less time enjoying life. We get caught up in the rat-race and confuse our needs with our wants. We become a slave to a lifestyle instead of spending our time drinking up all the beauty that surrounds us. Life is short and getting shorter by the minute...ENJOY LIFE!!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
Well said, Susan! Maybe it's my age speaking (retirement does end the need for life in the "fast lane") but I think smelling the roses (and new-mown hay) is more important than all this effort to help someone else build their fortune. I really enjoyed this one!

Ted

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
Oh yesssss.... Can't WAIT for all that new-mown hay... Today is my late mother's birthday and she would have been thrilled at the spring nip in the air. Susan, you are a master at whatever form of versifying you choose and totally in control always of your subject. On top of that, you consistently set the appropriate tone and direction for the mood of your work... in short, you are the consummate artist. Have to agree absolutely with your Emerson quote, though it is my too high a spirit that continually encumbers me with all my old nonsense!! :)) Wherever I go, there I am.... LOL K xx

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
Sound advise and words we could all live by. Thanks for the timely reminder Susan, too often we forget that life is fleeting.

Fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
Something to ponder.


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