"Hello", she says."I live on a plateau too."
And so she dares this lonely man to woo
A tall, intelligant blonde from some dream
Intimidating Woman-woman it would seem
Dare she does and accepts these bold words to persue
Into a foolish world as only words can do
Poetry and paintings lure this siren closer still
As spirits unite as only spirits will
Yet she feels as though love is a lost art
Mere words cannot woo this woman's heart
Alas words and oils are all she has to give
In her imagined hope that real love will live
Still spirits and hearts will blindly go
Forth...to far away playgrounds, even though
Wisdom senses the dangers lurking there
Truth is rarely found in the consequence of a dare
The die is cast and destiny awaits
This meeting...a possible folly of fate
All too quickly eyes seek out the comforting sight
Thus causing two souls to couple...unite
Timid smiles and a shy embrace
Bringing two eager hearts face to face
As a green turtle and a dolphin swim into the blue
Of her eyes as gifts of words are exchanged by two
Fill a room with soft music and sighs that might
Chase the clouds of doubt away from this fearless night
Where once only spirits chanced to meet
Now senses touch with their kisses sweet
From two lives full of joy and pain
Two hearts touch and meet again
In this vast plateau new love finds a way
To preserve this memory for another day.
This is my new favorite of yours. GORGEOUS write with stunning imagery: I could get lost in this one! And have: saving it to read again and again. Well done!
I love how you have tied the human emotion into that of the oceanic world, Susan. I am sure animals in the wild or beneath the sea feel many of the same emotions that we do. This is a captivating poem. Great work!
- - - Breath taking - old words for new poetry. Your talent for such is mind boggling... and I always enjoy them and the way you string your pearls! Joy to you this day! - Bill
Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
I loved the imagery you created in this wonderfully written poem, Susan ... hugs
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2007
A poem, a painting and an ocean, a combination that must bring forth a winner of poem. I loved particularly the last two lines. Victor
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Art Sun...
Ron
Love Tinka
Richard
This is my new favorite of yours. GORGEOUS write with stunning imagery: I could get lost in this one! And have: saving it to read again and again. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
This is very beautiful!
Jill
Two hearts touch and meet again
Lovely, Susan, as is that picture.
Fee
enjoyable reading
great imagery
William
Love & Peace