While you were sleeping I thought of you
Your wonderful wit...your anger too
That awesome appeal with hands that are great
The way that you touch me... for goodness sake
Its a fancy I need with the love I can use
The heart of this man and the soul of a muse
Nature all wound up and packaged so neat
Pieces of heaven and tasting so sweet
No diet control... I could never win
I'd dine on your passions again and again
It's awesome and filling, it's fate and it's love
It pushes toward heaven and backwards the shove
It's lightning and thunder with filtered rain
It's cleansing a heart once full of pain
It's healing treasures and warming like toast
Gregarious virtues and rhythms that boast
It's wet... sometimes wild... and hard things that burst
It's love and it's you... then its quenching a thirst
I thought of you and goosebumps broke out
Along with mixed climaxes
Deep breaths and shouts
My mind is alive while yours is asleep
Warming to pleasures in your soul... I keep.
It's light- hearted and loving, while also being romantic-like.
Did you notice, those feelings always seem to shine brightest when he's not awake or looking to seem them?
Very nice!
Em
Always refreshing. . . .
Always new. . . .
How do you keep doing . . .
What you do!
Excellent flow, love the rhyme pattern
Builds and builds, wakes me up when it explodes with
such a touching ending!
Doug
STrong feelings and emotions weaveing in and out in this smashing write about one's hearts feelings. I love the way your thoughts are always with your loved ones even in sleep.
This poem is like a roller coaster gaining momentum. Spoken aloud it flows as easy across the tongue as tears flow from the eyes. Superb Belle!
Blessings ...
Richard
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
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Love, Pierre
always,
randy
Did you notice, those feelings always seem to shine brightest when he's not awake or looking to seem them?
Very nice!
Em
Always new. . . .
How do you keep doing . . .
What you do!
Excellent flow, love the rhyme pattern
Builds and builds, wakes me up when it explodes with
such a touching ending!
Doug
very nice work.....
Art Sun...
Cold shower time!!
Walt
enjoyed...
John
Fee
Blessings ...
Richard
Ron
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Beautifully written!
Love,
Eileen
Sleeping (dreaming) on both our minds, tonight: well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.