"I saw an angel in a stone and I chipped away to set her free."
Michelangelo
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Here it is the dawn of beginnings
The real and depth of super births
The Nova of the blast resounds
Building... filling more it's worth
Life is living as hearts merge beating
Infantile rejuvenation...giving
Meaning more than thoughts trespassing
Miracles born without impressions
Illusions dreams....gauze of fitting
Shadows silhouettes emissions
Not alone this pair awakens
Groggy dizzy
Walking giddy
Circle round about and shaking
Fuzzy dreams tremble...making
Hearts on fire with flames soaring
Fullness illuminating wonders
Thoughts alive while passion thunders
No old cliches' or verb's intention
True love defies definition
It's a Nova's birth
A Comet's tail
Vesuvious power
Kohotecks trail
It's freeer than an infant's breath
It's an abyss with a softer depth
It's a heaven born in a smile
The shine that glows inside of miles
It's a wordsmith's gifted angle
Speaks in voices... encored angels
It's fullness living in colored demensions
It's love above for all intended
Description has no dress for this
However birthed it's a perfect fit.
True love is predestined and immortal and holds joy that defies description, yet you
feel it and describe it so well. You are so talented and gifted.
This is such a beautiful write. Love, Pierre
A poem of vivid images filling the universe with beauty and such grace. As your words flow, your voice leads this reader through a beautiful scenes to the ending. Liked it a lot!
The stars glow from this write as you capture the majesty of beauty the heavenly skies offer us... you are the mistress of the universe with this one Susan...I love it.
hugs
Fee
Ron
However birthed it's a perfect fit."
This is really good Susan, the journey in the mind by your words is gret...enjoyed.
Allen
Peace, Love, and light,
Amber "V"
Walt
feel it and describe it so well. You are so talented and gifted.
This is such a beautiful write. Love, Pierre
Born to be read again and again.
Needless to say, I really liked this.
Doug
love the great imagery you have managed
to leave in my mind
Peace & Love Be with you
William
Kathy
hugs
Fee
Love,
Eileen